First, I want to give you a huge hug for continuing this! I adore this fic and seeing an update on my flist was enough to make my entire week.
I love that this chapter is dedicated to the Doctor's internal struggle. His mind is such a maze and I think you've done well articulating the madness that he's trying to maintain a grasp on.
I have to say that you have me completely and totally frightened for Rose's well-being. It has been so easy for her to distance herself in the name of self-preservation, but she's pushed away too much - and the Doctor is certainly in no condition to reach her. They're both such a muddled mess of pain and longing right now, and they're so wrapped up in doing what is best for the other that they're driving themselves mad.
Now, please understand that I must hurt you though for ending this chapter on such a cruel cliff-hanger! Absolutely evil of you! : )
Oh, my God! How can you leave us there???!!! I think I've said it before, but your writing is wonderful(*is sheepishly very jealous!*)! I can't wait for the rest! You are going to give them a little lovin' aren't you ?, at the end?..it feels like they both deserve it!! This poor Doctor has been through a lot with you! and so has Rose! It feels like you need a bit of light in all this bleakness!(enjoys your bleakness a lot,though ;P) Lovely fic, though, please keep it up! :)
Wow, I just found this fic, read all eight chapters in one go, and I'm enthralled. I don't know how I'm going to wait until it's updated! Hurry, please, or I might perish.
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I love that this chapter is dedicated to the Doctor's internal struggle. His mind is such a maze and I think you've done well articulating the madness that he's trying to maintain a grasp on.
I have to say that you have me completely and totally frightened for Rose's well-being. It has been so easy for her to distance herself in the name of self-preservation, but she's pushed away too much - and the Doctor is certainly in no condition to reach her. They're both such a muddled mess of pain and longing right now, and they're so wrapped up in doing what is best for the other that they're driving themselves mad.
Now, please understand that I must hurt you though for ending this chapter on such a cruel cliff-hanger! Absolutely evil of you! : )
More please (soon)!
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More soon, please? Or we'll have to turn on the terrawatt puppy-dog eyes...
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How can you leave us there???!!!
I think I've said it before, but your writing is wonderful(*is sheepishly very jealous!*)!
I can't wait for the rest! You are going to give them a little lovin' aren't you ?, at the end?..it feels like they both deserve it!! This poor Doctor has been through a lot with you! and so has Rose! It feels like you need a bit of light in all this bleakness!(enjoys your bleakness a lot,though ;P)
Lovely fic, though, please keep it up! :)
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