Looking for opinions!

[nodressrehersal]

Enhance Your Home * Organize Your Life  *  Renew Your Spirit

I think it's a little too touchy-feely with the "spirit" part in there, and it doesn't address office organizing. The website has been moved to wordpress and updated, so if it would help to peek at that, here's a link: www.homesolutionswny.comSo here's a list of some brainstorming ideas

Comments

[joebanks]

I choose #4 but think you could throw #2 in toward the bottom of your website.
Since everything is so quick: someone goes to your page, takes a quick glance up and down before he/she decides to actually read it; your going to need an image of an office, or home office, whatever your focus will be, to grab them. IMHO!

[nodressrehersal]

Thanks for your input, joebanks.

[kabuldur]

That's funny, I don't like the three slogan thing. I prefer two. I don't like the phrase organising your life...unless that is what you do.

[nodressrehersal]

Well, to a large degree it actually is what we do. Clients are so overwhelmed with their "stuff" that it often starts out as one job and slowly expands into many other areas of their life.

[kabuldur]

Okay!

[bookglowwurm]

This is hard! I like the idea of putting your mission statement on the back of the card. I like the word "solutions". I like simplifying too but not everyone sees that as a priority. I kind of like combining 2 and 3. Providing solutions for organizing your home, your office, your life.

[nodressrehersal]

Yeah, I think using the back of the card makes sense, since sometimes that's all people see, they don't go online.

Ooh, nice, combining, since those are my two favorites, and my employee weighed in and she likes #3 best... *off to ponder*