Modes of Persuasion, Chapter 2/?

[nocookies4u]

Title: Modes of Persuasion
Fandom: Spider-Man (movieverse 1-3)
Pairing: Harry/Peter
Chapter Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Spider-Man, the comics and the movies, do not belong to me, and I am making no profit off of this.
Chapter Summary: In which Harry gets drunk, buries his father, and breaks up with everyone.

Author's Note:  I am apparently

Comments

[lietothedevil]

oh harry harry harry. hate peter for killing your father, yet disappointed when he didn't show. and then you get jealous. *sigh* you poor sad man. loved the chapter.

[nocookies4u]

Thanks! And yes, Harry is the definition of conflicted <3

[serendipitix]

Hi¡ I liked it and hope it continues¡

[nocookies4u]

Hi! Thank you for your comment. I like your upside down exclamation points!

[endeni]

Wow. Just... wow. That was even more awesome than the first chapter! *__*

P.S. As for the beta, have you tried beta_search, find_me_a_beta or http://www.fanfiction.net/betareaders/?

[nocookies4u]

Thanks for the compliments and thank you so much for the links! They're exactly what I've been looking for.

[zed_azrael]

I was digging through old Spider-Man fic, and I stumbled upon this little jewel. What you have here is both excellent characterisation and plot establishment. I love love love how real and raw you've written Harry, and his interactions with Peter are just so alsjdlf;a

I'm a little distressed by the fact that there is NO MORE D: and it's been almost a year since you updated, but I will survive!

[ext_629513]

loved the story, but wishing there was more. :