fic: Breaking Up (rps: Cheryl / Kimberley)

[noclueontheloo]

It was Hilary, she sounded stressed.

“You’ve probably heard about this already from Cheryl,” she had begun.

Kimberley said nothing. She hadn’t heard about it from Cheryl. She’d heard next to nothing from Cheryl ever since her mad midnight dash to Oxshott.

Not that she was at all surprised by the announcement.

“There’s more,” Hilary had stated

Comments

[displacedaway]

God damn. That was heavy and heart breaking and just lovely. I was hoping you were going to update this fic again and you certainly didn't disappoint. It was refreshing to get the switch back to Cheryl's POV since we've only gotten tiny glimpses into her mindset over the past few chapters

[noclueontheloo]

Thanks very much for sticking with it. I hope I feel inspired too. Real life took over for a while there, both mine and CC's. I was sort of seeing how her split was gonna play out, but it looks like that story is treading water at the mo. And I'm glad you like fic Cheryl cos personally I love her.

[displacedaway]

I always forget to mention this, but I love the art that goes along with each of your fics. It adds another dimension to them; great touch.

[noclueontheloo]

Thank you! I try.

[pew_pew_pew]

Amazeballs. This was totally worth the wait. The ending was so left-field my jaw dropped, literally had to re-read the whole thing twice. But I'm agreeing with the comment before, I reckon Kimba's just scared at the prospect of finally having something she's been yearning for since the beginning. Intense stuff :) Already can't wait for the next chapter.

[noclueontheloo]

Thanks so much. I know 2 months is a ridiculous time to wait for an update. Hopefully the next one will come sooner.

[noclueontheloo]

Cheers for commenting. I too hope the next chapter will be good. Have to have a good ol' think about it.

[anonymous]

i love this. absolutely love this.

i've meant to comment on previous chapters but kept forgetting, i'm sorry!

the way you make it seem so realistic is amazing.
their emotions fit both cheryl and kimberley perfectly, even nicola's little part sounded like nicola. i love it.

the ending was so good.
cheryl pouring her heart out and kimberley being too scared to barely say anything at all.

my favorite part was when you had cheryl counting to 10 but she only made it to 3 and then freaked out. it shows how she's still all over the place and hot tempered.

i hope you continue this fic because it's seriously one of the best, most realistic i've ever read.

[noclueontheloo]

Hey, thanks so much! Obviously I don't know them at all and have to very much create characters for Kimberley and Cheryl, but I'm glad they ring true and sound authentic.

[anonymous]

Once again I loved your writing, and the new installment of this story

[noclueontheloo]

Thank you for taking the time to write such a detailed comment! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Kimberley and Cheryl, definitely complex. But then, it would be, wouldn't it?