My god. If I thought the last line of your previous update killed me, I've been assassinated five times over with this one. The level of self-deprecation and pain is so incredibly tangible. I just want to give Cheryl the biggest hug ever.
At the same time I feel for Kimberley too because she's sort of being dragged about on Cheryl's emotional roller coaster. One of the things I think you've done really well in this fic is give both Cheryl and Kimberley enough depth that the reader can identify with both of them. I'm really curious as to how Kimberley will react to this bit of information she wasn't supposed to hear - this piece of insight into Cheryl's mindset and what is really driving her actions.
Thank you. Yeah I was hpoing Cheryl would come across as a bit more sympathetic. it's like they've both got their reasons, they just deal with things in very different ways.
You HAVE to update this, I've been waiting for like, 2 months! You're so talented, you've pretty much got Cheryl down to a tee. Wonder if you're gonna include the Cheryl/Ashley split in there? :)
Well, thank you, that is obviously a very nice thing to hear and I'm glad that anyone is still interested in this story. I have to say, your timing is impeccable -I've been working on the next part and it should be up soon, probably tomorrow. Thanks for commenting and sticking with it.
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At the same time I feel for Kimberley too because she's sort of being dragged about on Cheryl's emotional roller coaster. One of the things I think you've done really well in this fic is give both Cheryl and Kimberley enough depth that the reader can identify with both of them. I'm really curious as to how Kimberley will react to this bit of information she wasn't supposed to hear - this piece of insight into Cheryl's mindset and what is really driving her actions.
This fic is like crack and I'm beyond addicted.
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