Fic: The Right Girl

[rowofstars]

Title: The Right Girl
Author: Lindsay (nylana)
Beta: Mary (stillxmyxheart)
Rating: Adult
Genre: Smut, Fluff, Romance
Word Count: 3,492
Characters/Pairings: Nathan, Emily, Nathan/Emily
Summary: Life is about moments, and Nathan has finally found the right one.

A/N: This scene has been in my head since I wrote Sins of the Father. I almost included it but at the time I

Comments

[stillxmyxheart]

I LOVE THIS, AND THEM, AND YOU, SO FUCKING MUCH. GAH.

[rowofstars]

I ADORE YOU MORE THAN SUNSHINE AND RAINBOWS AND PUPPIES.♥♥

[happyfew]

WELL. :O OMG. I STILL DON'T KNOW WHAT I'VE DONE TO DESERVE THIS.

I LOVE THE BEGINNING SO HARD, THEY ARE SO ADORABLE, IT HURTS A LITTLE.

Each toe is painted with a different color of polish simply because she was bored on Wednesday

Each toe is painted with a different color of polish simply because she was bored on Wednesday

Each toe is painted with a different color of polish simply because she was bored on Wednesday

There are no words for how much I love this line. XD

though they have nothing to do with yoga or exercise and everything to do with making her ass look irresistible. NATHAN ASS GATES IS MY FAVOURITE PERSON IN THE WHOLE WIDE FUCKING WORLD.

The color of his eyes still amazes her, so deep and blue, full of love and secrets she’s still learning. THIS LINE IS FUCKING MAGIC. OMG. GARY, YOUR EYES ARE AMAZING.

He kisses like he makes love, always slow at first, as if he’s relearning her every time, as if it’s been forever since he last kissed or touched her FAVOURITE. LINE. EVER.

She looks him over, jeans still

[rowofstars]

I STILL DON'T KNOW WHAT I'VE DONE TO DESERVE THIS.
YOU EXIST BB. THAT IS ENOUGH.

There are no words for how much I love this line.
I'm so glad because it was one of those things that was in my head with the whole image of how she looked but I almost forgot to include it! How terrible would that have been??

NATHAN ASS GATES IS MY FAVOURITE PERSON IN THE WHOLE WIDE FUCKING WORLD.
*dies* ♥

I'm so glad you liked this. I'm really pleased with how it all came out.

AND SO THE GATES FAMILY BEGAN.
START ADORABLE AND EPIC, END ADORABLE AND EPIC.

[professor_spork]

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The attention to detail is just... nothing short of exquisite. Sound and sight and sensation... reading this fic is like total sensory immersion. And they're so SWEET and so NEW and so... young. God, they're both so *young.*

[rowofstars]

THANK YOU SO MUCH! ♥♥♥ I'm so totally flattered right now. *blush*

God, they're both so *young.*
THEY ARE. It's so much fun to write them this way, all precious and shiny and fresh.

[johnmayergirl23]

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

This was alllll the Nathan/Emily fluffy love I've been missing. :)

So many perfect lines, but this: He kisses like he makes love, always slow at first, as if he’s relearning her every time, as if it’s been forever since he last kissed or touched her. was fantastic. So, so perfectly Nathan, and only Emily would pick up on it.

[rowofstars]

Heee! I was waiting all day for you to see this. ♥ I'm so glad you liked it! I plan to write more fluffy love with these two, because their lives aren't all angst and sadness.

[johnmayergirl23]

I legit haven't been on the computer since Friday, so this was the perfect surprise! :)

I love picturing them. They've got this amazingly-in-love dynamic that reminds me of Henry and Clare from The Time Traveler's Wife (omgomg my favorite ever), especially with the red-headed artist and the bookish alcoholic, just SO GOOD.

[rowofstars]

YES. It is rather like that. They seem so different but they really aren't deep down and they are so very much in love it's kind of ridiculous. I suppose that's why, in spite of all the shit they put each other through, they never really separated.

[klingonlady]

Spicy and sweet ALL IN THE SAME AWESOME FIC!!!! I love it!! This is fantastic!! But that is not surprising, all your fics are as fantastic as you are!

[rowofstars]

D'AWWW. YOU FLATTER ME SO. ♥ Thank you, bb!