My third "Chance Meeting" drabble fic. Sorry for the unusual pairing this time round but sometimes I just want to try and explore couples that others avoid
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It doesn't seem such an unusual pairing the way you've written it. And I liked how Pegasus is not afraid until Dartz says he wants his soul and yet, he can't stop thinking about Dartz in the same way he does Cynthia. Nice story.
That was lovely. Poor Pegasus, he just doesn't get a break now does he? x3 You kept them natural even during their interaction, and I admire that muchly since many people seem intent on making Pegasus overly sadistic because they lose sight of his original ordeal. I'm glad you made a point of emphasising his devotion to Cynthia.
Thanks. ^^ It annoys me when Pegasus gets written like that. These fics about Pegasus raping Yugi or whoever just scare me because I see them as being OOC.
But I decided a while ago it's impossible to write any kind of romance involving him without dealing with his love for Cynthia. DK showed that he was far too obsessed with her for her to simply be forgotten about in a fanfic. ^^;
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<3 =D Well done!
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But I decided a while ago it's impossible to write any kind of romance involving him without dealing with his love for Cynthia. DK showed that he was far too obsessed with her for her to simply be forgotten about in a fanfic. ^^;
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