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Game Day! Truth or Dare

Nov 08, 2011 08:38

Welcome to Tuesday! If you didn’t have a chance to check it out, yesterday we came up with a bunch of new ficlets about pilots that you should go read.

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Heavy Chains word_vomity November 8 2011, 15:43:38 UTC

They never took them off. Even in the darkness of their rack as their bodies pushed and pulled angrily against one another. When every other inch of skin was bare and warm with hunger, the thin metal tags remained. Cool reminders against burning skin. Constantly calling them back from the oblivion of flesh. Reminding them that their promise to the fleet always had to come first. Even before this. Afterward, as they lay in a sweaty jumble of weak but satisfied limbs, their tags were always left tangled together, holding their wearers close, when they might otherwise run. Lee complained when she made him untangled the jangling knots. She just smiled as he worked, they both knew that his bitching didn't mean anything. Even though he whined every time, he'd never suggested taking them off. Neither had she. Some things were more important than them right now. But maybe not always, she thought hopefully despite her mind's warnings. Maybe one day, she prayed, they'd be free. She imagined what it might feel like then, to pull his naked form ( ... )

Re: Heavy Chains sugarhaven November 8 2011, 15:53:08 UTC

OMG. This is sooooo good.

Re: Heavy Chains word_vomity November 8 2011, 16:02:16 UTC

Thank you! *Helo hugs you*

Re: Heavy Chains callmeonetrack November 8 2011, 16:16:55 UTC

Lovely imagery, lovely writing. <3

Re: Heavy Chains word_vomity November 8 2011, 16:25:17 UTC

Lovely comment. <3

Thank you!

Re: Heavy Chains kdbleu November 8 2011, 16:45:46 UTC

That's really lovely. A really fresh angle. :)

Re: Heavy Chains word_vomity November 8 2011, 17:01:27 UTC

Thank you! Appreciate it! :)

Re: Heavy Chains workerbee73 November 8 2011, 17:36:21 UTC

Really good stuff. I echo all the previous imagery comments. Bravo! : D

Re: Heavy Chains word_vomity November 8 2011, 19:57:13 UTC

So happy you enjoyed it! :D

Re: Heavy Chains embolalia November 8 2011, 18:31:25 UTC

This is lovely! And so real; the military really is essential to both of their identities for most of the show.

Re: Heavy Chains word_vomity November 8 2011, 19:59:01 UTC

It really was.

Thank you thank you thank you!

Re: Heavy Chains rdave1 November 8 2011, 18:56:37 UTC

A very unique view. I like it!

Re: Heavy Chains word_vomity November 8 2011, 19:59:33 UTC

Thank you!

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Re: Heavy Chains word_vomity November 8 2011, 19:59:47 UTC

Glad to hear it! :)

Re: Heavy Chains wicked_sassy November 9 2011, 16:10:35 UTC

Excellent--love the image of Kara telling Lee to untangle them. Such symbolic and great imagery.

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