presto [3/3]

[nkots]

Title: Presto [3/3]
Pairing: Baekhyun/Chanyeol
Word count: ~2K
Rated: PG-13
Summary: There are two sides to Chanyeol, the dreamcatcher who pulls rabbits out of hats and the pickpocketing dickbag. Baekhyun is in love with both and understands neither. Magician AU.

Comments

[naomibe]

Your story put a spell on me. I love to read these kind of story, because it encourages me to do better. I absolutely loved the way you write. I'm not a native english speaker, so I can't tell you what I prefer technically, but I can tell you that I loved the whole atmosphere. Each sentence has its flavor.

I love Baekhyun and his still broken heart and his gray life that came alive when Chanyeol entered in it. Yet, Chanyeol's life isn't better than his. But they created a perfect alchemy. I was so worried when things began to be strange between them. I was imagining a bad end and it scared me. But fortunately, they found their own personal magic again.

Ah, I don't know how to explain what I felt... It was different and... yes, magic :)
Thank you for this amazing story <3

[nkots]

/blushes violently/ you're so kind!
thank you for reading and your english is actually very good ^.^

[daenamic]

I've never read anything so...magical before..and I fell in love with this fic about three paragraphs in. seriously, the way you wrote it and the language and basically every single thing in this fic made my heart go all tingly in all the right ways T_T
I thought chanyeol's character was just...really amazing and it broke me a little when baekhyun drove him away

[nkots]

thank you for reading! /showers you in gratitutde/

[onism]

God I just love everything about this fic. When I first read the summary I already knew I was going to love this, that and I was going to experience quite a bit of heart break somewhere along the story. The way you wrote everything, how you described things, your fricking characterization of Baekhyun and Chanyeol just tugged at my heart. And I just absolutely love the mood this entire story has. It has this feeling you can't quite put into words properly. Something that feels all too real with that dash of fantasy and dreams and you can imagine everything as if you were experiencing it yourself.

[Tl;dr: this fic is the epitome of perfection amongst other perfections and I think I'm just gonna lie down and cry over your writing.]

[nkots]

you're too kind :3 thank you so much for reading!

[lizardbelle]

That was such a good story. The whole atmosphere, tone, writing, setting, characters... everything was so perfect! And of course i especially loved Magician!Chanyeol, he was so charming and you painted the most beautiful picture <3 Thank you so much for this!

[nkots]

gah magic and magicians are just the best! thank you for reading ^.^

[lizardbelle]

So true! <3 And THANK YOU for writing it; reading is the easy part. ;)

[digindeeper]

oh i am in love with this story. you have a musical way with words, and it was an absolute pleasure getting to read this. thank you! :D

[nkots]

that's so nice of you asdfjkl thank you for reading!