[Flash Fic] Twenty [one] Questions

[nkiseki]

Title: Twenty [one] Questions
Rating: PG
Genre: Humor
Characters/Pairings: France/England with allusions to France sleeping around.
Summary: France and England play twenty questions.
Words: 284
Notes: Watch as I don't study for my exams. For the hetalia_contest, but mostly because I am masochistic.

Comments

[tiger_azul]

Oh this was tremendously cute and funny! It made me chuckle, though, when England finds out the nation France is thinking about is blond - doesn’t really narrow it down much since about 90% of the European ones seem to be, for some reason!
And I loved how, although this is all dialogue, you can easily fill in the gaps yourself, especially at the end with all the muffled silences ♥

[nkiseki]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Writing purely using dialogue to convey actions is actually kind of difficult, but it's been a long time since I've done something like this, so I'm glad you were able to fill in the words in between :D

[tanya_tsuki]

That was totally adorable and amusing :D Just how I like my FrUK <3

[nkiseki]

Good! Cos that's how I like my FrUK too ^^

[ghibli22]

Oh god.. That was so cute but... D:
My response to this prompt was all dialogue too but I swear i didn't copy! I posted then read the others. OTL
And yours is so much better then mine too... Good god. So cute.

[nkiseki]

I don't blame you since it's a somewhat common style, especially when writing short pieces. I find it actually rather challenging to convey actions using just dialogue, and that itself is another part of making this style kind of fun to do. Also, I do the same thing (write a prompt then read others)... So yeah.

Thank you, and mine is not better than your response because I just read it and... I'll leave a comment there instead ^^

[original_arthur]

I AM NOT A COLD ENGLISH WOMAN, YOU STRUMPET!

[nkiseki]

Oh baby, you so are.

[moirae]

This was so clever! I love the way you've portrayed the two of them and their dynamic--their competitive natures, France's playfulness, England's gruff denial...it was all done so well! The end was absolutely perfect, too! &hearts

Just a quick thing, though. In this line: "Non, and that was twenty-one. It's called Twenty Question for a reason. How does losing feel?", shouldn't it read Twenty Questions? :D

[nkiseki]

Thank you!

Why yes, I do believe you're right! And it's now been fixed; thank you for catching that! :D