And when it stops, it stops. My heart stopped beating...

Dec 27, 2005 10:57

I blame this on my fascination and obsession with Medium...

Title: To See The Night
Author: Niz4
Email: nimitz4@hotmail.com
Summary: One must see the night before one can realize the day. River sees...
Rating: PG13
Characters: River / Zoe - with cameo’s from the others...
Pairing: None
Spoilers/Timeline: Post Serenity...gah, don't look!
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ninamonkey December 27 2005, 01:38:17 UTC
Came by way of the Cortex - powerful, powerful piece. I really enjoyed it. I could see this happening, and in a perverted way I hope it does, if a next movie comes.

It would be awesome. ;)

--"n."

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ninamonkey December 27 2005, 01:40:13 UTC
Oops - I meant by way of ff_fanfic. ;)

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niz4 December 27 2005, 06:13:59 UTC
*grins and happy sighs

Thank you so much...I'm glad you liked it.

in a perverted way I hope it does, if a next movie comes

*nods. Yes yes...I wanted to see it too...and I understand why they didn't show anything like it in Serenity (not enough time for all the lovely scenes and moments and details of the character's lives), but it just seemed like a little gap in the film. That we never got to really see Zoe's journey of grief.

So I had to write about it myself *wide smile

Plus I got to explore the spookiness that is River Tam...which is always fun...hee

Anyhoo, thanks for writing to me, it's always lovely to get feedback, and seeing as how it's that time of year - Merry Christmas.

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Do You Know That Girl? bagelwhore December 27 2005, 01:41:30 UTC
wow, this is really deep
and very nicely written
you got the characters down to the dot
as usual
great job ^_^

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Re: Do You Know That Girl? niz4 December 27 2005, 06:33:01 UTC
*squeee...grabs bagelwhore and hugs her tight

Merry christmas! Hello you!!! Gah, I've been trying to get time to respond to your post about Novice, and it's just been...gah bleh work-vomit. And now I've done all my christmas 'chores' and managed to survive christmas day with my family I can finally get online.

God, it's such bliss!

Heeee...I only posted this fic this morning and already you've posted me something - how do you manage to do this?! I am in awe...

*grins

I'm glad you liked it. I like writing from River's perspective, and exploring all the strangeness that is just...her. Plus like I said, it's my own personal homage to Medium - i'm such a sucker for that show *blush

And also I wanted the Zoe pain...cos I am a whore for angsty goodness. Ahhh the pain it burns so fine... *grins

Anyway, that's enough blah blah from me...I just wanted to say thankyou and I hope your christmas is tracking well for you...plus Happy New Year *grins

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Re: Do You Know That Girl? niz4 December 27 2005, 09:13:39 UTC
Isn't it the best song? I just love the way she sings those words...gorgeous.

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Re: Do You Know That Girl? fourseat December 27 2005, 18:49:02 UTC
Best. Icon. Ever.

Also, the fic is fantastic!

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meinterrupted December 27 2005, 02:04:24 UTC
Wow. First of all, I'm glad that I'm not the only person who sees this happening, Zoë using River to comfort her after Wash's death. Secondly, this is so amazingly powerful. You've got a real talent for the dramatic; I've noticed it before. This is really, really great.

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niz4 December 27 2005, 06:53:55 UTC
Wow - thank you for this. *grins

You've got a real talent for the dramatic
*laughs. That's what my b/friend says all the time, but it sounds sooo much nicer coming from you, and I don't think he means it in quite the same way *grins

I'm so glad that other people like this one apart from just me...angsty stuff can be difficult to write cos I never feel totally confident that I haven't gone over into Soppy Land. I wanted it to be dramatic but still have that dark weirdness that is River...and I wanted it to retain some of the bitterness that I think Zoe would have felt.

I mean, that's how i'd feel if I was her...the thing that would just go round and round in my mind would be 'why didn't she tell me?!?!'. PO'd would be an understatement...

And I agree with you, River would be the only logical choice to provide any real comfort to Zoe.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it enough to send me a post *grins

Merry christmas, and I hope the New Year brings you good fortune and golden luck!

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niz4 December 28 2005, 09:59:01 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it *grins
I'm not sure if my earlier reply made it to you - something weird happened with it, so just to be sure I wanted to send another. Just in case :)

You're icon is gorgeous...those two sweetcakes.

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niz4 December 27 2005, 10:06:45 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it *smiles

I love your icon...they're so sweet those two. The movie just destroyed me...

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