Comments | nixa_jane: SPN: Packing Heat and Various Articles of Clothing (PG-13), Gen.

laytoncolt in nixa_jane

SPN: Packing Heat and Various Articles of Clothing (PG-13), Gen.

May 03, 2006 20:47

Three times Sam Winchester almost left, and the one time he did.

( packing heat and various articles of clothing )

Comments 42

zionsstarfish May 4 2006, 05:08:00 UTC

oh, Dean! oh, this entire story! I think your writing got stronger as the story went on... by the end, you were hitting every note just about spot on, especially Dean, and how he relates to Sam and John. The hospital section, and the last section, were my favourites. John seemed less... fully realized as a character than the other two, but that could be because you did such a wonderful job with Sam and Dean. Great story.

laytoncolt May 4 2006, 21:49:21 UTC

Thank you! I'm definitely still trying to figure John out, he's quite the mystery. :-)

saekokato May 4 2006, 05:31:57 UTC

*points to above comment* What Zion said.

laytoncolt May 4 2006, 21:50:25 UTC

Thank you! :-)

iamstealthyone May 4 2006, 05:33:37 UTC

Great story! I really liked how you wrote both Sam and Dean's struggles here. Some great turns of phrase, and nice characterizations ( ... )

laytoncolt May 4 2006, 21:51:57 UTC

Thank you so much! I always love to see the parts that stand out to people, and I really appreciate you taking the time to give such lovely feedback! :-)

quietdiscerning May 4 2006, 05:49:27 UTC

oh. that was so sad and beautiful.

*sniffles* this is such a sad FANDOM omg.

laytoncolt May 4 2006, 21:53:57 UTC

Thank you! :-)

riveria May 4 2006, 12:20:29 UTC

This is wonderful. I love your take on the circumstances under which Sam left and the love/hate relationship with John.

laytoncolt May 4 2006, 21:54:40 UTC

Thank you! :-)