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nix_this

Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene

Feb 14, 2011 01:00

Title:Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene
Universe/Series:STR
Rating:NC-17
Pairing: K/S
Relationship status: Quasi First Time
Word count:~3900
Genre: PWP
Tropes: Kink (orgasm denial), mindmeld
Warnings: None really. Just smut and swearing
Summary: Originally written as comment porn for awarrington because she totally called me out on my fade to black XD (I still plead ( Read more... )

team angstwhore in the house, writing??, destiny's bitch, star trek, fanfic, we can't stop here-this is porn country!, all of my life decisions have been good

Comments 45

illariy February 14 2011, 18:18:38 UTC

Uuuuh, the hotness! :D

nix_this February 14 2011, 18:49:59 UTC

Thank you :D

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nix_this February 15 2011, 17:02:26 UTC

There are stories that *can't* be improved by super hot porn?

*MIND IZ BLOWN*

Thanks, bb :D

red_daughter February 15 2011, 03:01:44 UTC

You hit one of my kinks there at the end, really hard. ♥♥♥
Or mebbe it was the whole thing.

Anywho.
*Limps away to bunk*

nix_this February 15 2011, 17:03:18 UTC

lol

Awesome! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

angels3 February 15 2011, 06:54:43 UTC

So I have no idea why she had to shame you into doing porn because this was beyond fantastic!

I love that you had Spock controlling the orgasm with a meld, I don't think I've read that anywhere else before and it's an awesome take on both the kink and the meld.

Loved it. :)

nix_this February 15 2011, 17:08:28 UTC

lol

I PLEAD DEADLINES.

I was literally writing Destiny's Bitch up until an hour before I posted. I had to choose between porn and plot XD

To my EVERLASTING SHAME I chose plot.

*Amanda saw this and mocked me mercilessly and I said: "HA! I'll show you who *fades to black* you unreasonable harpy!" 3900 words of smut, kink and more smut later, I crawled away from my computer and smoked an entire pack of cigarettes. Porn-zhaustion claimed another victim that night - BUT IT WAS WORTH IT.

*the above may have been **slightly exaggerated for dramatic effect.

**slightly

*g* I'm glad you liked it, especially the kinky bits :D

ETA - corrected a redundant word that needed correction XD

angels3 February 15 2011, 18:02:17 UTC

*grins* I see a fellow OCD'er in that edited comment.

Well I'm glad she did because I'd have hated to miss that part of the story. Although lord knows you don't need to be smoking a pack of cigarettes even though the sex WAS that good. :) Go with Spocks weakness CHOCOLATE!

Looking forward to reading more of your writing.

blcwriter February 15 2011, 17:47:24 UTC

Hnnnnnngh.

Yeah. So glad you added this on.

nix_this February 15 2011, 17:50:30 UTC

Woot!

Srs question for a writer type person whose opinion I respect:

Should I go ahead and throw this into the main story or just leave it as a sextra?

*iz unsure*

blcwriter February 16 2011, 16:23:58 UTC

*blushy McBlushersons*

I think you could integrate it easily and it flows right into the rest of the story as a nice counterpoint to the OWOHSHIT of the embarrassment WAITTHISCAN'TBEREAL of what happened down on the planet. My only concern would be that it has the potential to make the epilogue kind of extraneous-- although maybe not? what does the esteemed ms. j. lester have to say?-- so maybe it's best to leave it as a sextra for us horny types, since the way you wrote it originally flows so wonderfully into the (hilarious possessive!Spock) ending.