An Odd Wonderland (Chapter 1)
Nix: Ahh, it’s about time I do a sporking that isn't a video game. This is a spork of a popular French animated television series called Code Lyoko. This fanfiction in question is by DeadlyVampire-DayDream Corp. Let’s... just get this over with.
Rated M to be safe. An Odd/OC series. Rose has a similer background as Odd.She's strange, just like Odd, but smart, unlike Odd.
Nix: Which, of course, makes you superior to him, huh? *humph*
Romance at first sight? Odd's the Mad Hatter, Rose is Alice... Nothing like Wonderland when we have LYOKO! Oh, and Kiwi...
Nix: I have a feeling that Odd would be very offended by Kiwi being tacked onto the end like this. Why is she Alice? Alice/Hatter isn’t canon at all. WHY?
An Odd Wonderland- Chapter One: Welcome To Kadic... or Not...
Nix: I can't believe how creative the author is! I could never aspire to be this gifted at naming a fanfiction.
Odd Della Robbia's Point of View
It was a normal day so far. I was sitting in Mrs. Hertz's class with Ulrich, Jeremy,
Nix: I believe it’s spelled “Jeremie...” This is actually one of the debates of the series. Some fans think it’s spelled “Jeremy,” “Jeremie,” or “Jérémie.” However, I've noticed that the English subtitles for the French version spell it "Jeremie." The wikis for the show also spell it the same way more often then not.
and Aelita. But I continued to ignore whatever our teacher was saying as I continued to draw Kiwi instead of taking notes.
Nix: While, this is something Odd has done before, it's dumb because Mrs. Hertz never says anything to Odd about it. Teachers generally don't like it when you draw instead of taking notes... not that I would know ANYTHING about that. *awkward cough*
That is, until Ulrich elbowed me in the side. "What?" I asked, looking over at him. He nodded towards the front.
Nix: (as Ulrich): Sorry, Odd, but the Sue’s here...
"Class, we have a new student joining us. Miss Zander, you may come in now."
Nix: Here we go...
In walked a girl with black hair that was longer than Yumi's. She was smiling while she stood. Already Sissi and her cronies were snickering at the girl's choice of clothing. On her back was a casket shaped black backpack. She was also wearing a white Jen's Pirate Booty Butterfly Top over a black corset top, what looked like pirate boots, a very small hooded jacket, and black skinny jeans with what looked to be voodoo dolls and blood splatter on the butt.
Nix: Considering that most of the cast are between the ages of twelve and thirteen... I’m not surprised that Sissi is snickering at her. After all, she has voodoo dolls and blood on her butt!
Now, imagine wearing a black corset under a butterfly shirt. Add skinny jeans with blood and voodoo dolls, a casket shaped backpack, a small jacket with a hood, and pirate boots. And finally, imagine a thirteen year old wearing this. Now, how ridiculous does that sound?
"I'm not that really new, Mrs. Hertz. I'm just changing classes so I'm around people my own age instead of the older kids."
Nix: Usually higher grades have more advanced lessons. If you were around people older than you, you must have been in a higher grade. Why drop all that so you could be around people your own age? Oh, wait, I know. It’s so she could meet her twu luv!
She explained before looking back at us. "Hi, my name is Rose Zander. I love flowers, video games, different styles of art, cats and dogs, music, relaxing with friends, hanging with my parents, playing music, and all around having a good time." Sissi huffed in the front and stuck her nose in the air. Man was she annoying.
Nix: Okay. Odd may not like Sissi and enjoy making fun of her, but he is NOT attuned to every little thing she does. He doesn’t care about her THAT much.
"Well then Miss Zander there's and open seat next to Mr. Della Robbia; raise your hand Mr. Della Robbia."
Nix: Of course there is...
I raised my hand. Rose smiled and made her way down the aisle, only to have Sissi stick her foot out and trip the poor girl.
Nix: ...Please don’t make Sissi hate and bother the Sue for no reason... please... On the other hand, Sissi could correctly detect the Sue. Good job, Sissi!
And the poor girl? She has voodoo dolls and BLOOD on her ass! What kind of home do you think she comes from?
Some people broke down and laughed while Mrs. Hertz gave Sissi detention.
Nix: Just for tripping someone? Jeez.
Rose slowly got up and dusted off her pants.
Nix: But neglected to dust off the VOODOO DOLLS AND BLOOD!!
I'm never going to let that go.
It didn't seem to faze her one bit. She turned and looked down at Sissi. "I'm so sorry. I didn't see your big foot there. Please accept my apology." I laughed in my hand along with Ulrich. With a sickly-sweet smile did she turn back around and take her seat on my left.
I could smell her perfume, it smelled like dying roses,
Nix: Dying roses smell exactly the same as normal roses. But, since Odd felt the need to label them as dying, I'm going to assume that he thinks she stinks.
the Earth after it just rained, and a small hint of winter. I rested my head on my fist as I went back to drawing.
Rose's Point of View
During class I did nothing but draw seeing as I already had the notes for this class.
Nix: How do you already have the notes for this class? Different classes take notes at different paces.
So I just drew the two boys on my right. I was guessing that the one with the blond hair with a purple diamond in the center would happen to be Mr. Della Robbia, but I wasn't all too sure on the light brunette. But I drew then both anyways.
Nix: Of course, she only draws the characters that are going to end up becoming her friends! It's not like she'd ever draw Herb or Nicholas.
I was using my Visconti Alchemy Vermeil - Limited Edition Sterling Silver Fountain Pen;
Nix: ...*casually punches the Sue in the face* You do not, under any circumstances, use a pen that costs 5,880 DOLLARS TO DOODLE IN CLASS YOU LITTLE OSTENTATIOUS SHITAO;IJWA’FA’
it was the only thing I ever used to draw.
Nix: *says very slowly* Until it runs out of ink. 'Cause, you know, that happens.
There are two ink colors on that pen. The main color is red, the secondary color is gold. She claims that she does all of her drawings with that pen... What? Is black outlining not good enough for her? Just because the ink is pretty and spshul, doesn’t make it aesthetically pleasing when you’re doing it with a simple drawing.
I crossed my legs as I turned slightly in my seat so I could see them a bit better. Then I continued on with my drawing as my tongue ring vibrated in my mouth.
Nix: A... tongue ring is... vibrating in your mouth...? I don't think it's supposed to do that. ...Wait a minute, is she supposed to be a goth? I couldn’t tell because I was too busy trying to figure out why the hell she has voodoo dolls on her ass and getting pissed off over her misuse of an expensive pen.
Soon the bell rung. Gathering all my books and everything did I leave class and head to the art department to turn in my assignment early.
Nix: Because the Sue is a perfect student. I dunno about this though. When I took Art I and II in school, it wasn't often that someone took it home with them. That's because our class was graded per day on participation whenever we had a project. If you had nothing to do, you started to lose points. Granted, it might not work the same way here, but still. Teachers don't like students who sit around and do nothing.
We had to do a portrait of people really important of us. I had done my parents sitting in a Victorian setting. My mother was dressed as an aristocratic lady sitting down on red velvet cushioned French chair. My dad stood right behind her on her left side, looking like a young lord.
Nix: OH MY GOD, HER ARTWORK SOUNDS SO PRETENTIOUS!
Mrs. McCann was sitting at her desk grading papers.
Nix: Of course, she has an OC as the art teacher...
She was wearing a red pencil skirt, a bright orange button up, and a loose black silk tie around her neck as long silk curls of melted dark chocolate spilled over her shoulders while adjusting her glasses.
Nix: Ouch, melted chocolate can get pretty hot. Better get that cleaned up. And why is the melted chocolate adjusting her glasses?
I knocked on the door frame before entering. Mrs. McCann looked up. "Oh, Rose! How is my star student?" she asked.
Nix: Oh, of course she is. Because just being "okay" at drawing is unacceptable for a Sue, right?
"I'm fine Mrs. McCann. I was just dropping off my assignment early." I handed over the painted portrait. She just beamed with joy. "You are such a gifted artist, Rose~ One of these days you'll hit it big and I'll be buying one of your paintings and hang it in my house!" she cooed.
Nix: *squicked* It sounds the teacher is flirting with her... It might just be because I associate the "~" symbol with a playful or flirty tone.
"Both you and Odd are at the top of my class! Oh, you two should partner up for the next project I have in mind; it'll be right up both of your allies!" Mrs. McCann clapped her hands together. "After all you both are in the same class~"
I never noticed another good artist other than myself in class.
Nix: (as Rose): Someone as skilled as me? Unheard of!
"How come I've never met him?" I asked. Her eyes widen.
"You've never met Odd?" I pulled my blue painted lips in a thin line as I frowned.
Nix: Well, now you can add blue painted lips to the image I mentioned before. In all honesty. I have a feeling that Odd would get freaked out by the idea of dating a goffick. I mean, he’d probably find the dark clothing and blue lips creepy.
Also, how do you miss Odd? Everyone at Kadic Academy looks normal and has normal hairstyles (sans Aelita). Odd looks like this:
How the HELL do you miss this kid with that kind of hair?
"Well, now, that's just a big shock." She looked up at the clock. "Oh, you best be going otherwise you might miss lunch."
Bidding Mrs. McCann farewell before I left; heading to the lunch room.
Grabbing my lunch I sat at an empty table with my drawing right next to me. I was multitasking; shoving food into my mouth while using my favorite pen to finish the finishing details of the drawing I started on during Mrs. Hertz's class.
Nix: *becomes horrified* You’re going to get crumbs all over your artwork! Why would you do that in the cafeteria? You could easily spill your drink and then completely ruin the drawing you made with your 5,880 DOLLAR PEN WHAT IS THIS BULLSHIT!?
It was only shading that was left and it only took my ten minutes to finish that and my food.
Nix: What kind of shading? Since she's using a pen to do it, is she hatching, cross-hatching, contour-hatching, scumbling, or stippling? Because, you know, you can’t gradient shade with a pen, no matter how expensive it is.
Dumping my tray I quickly left the lunch room and headed back towards the dorms to chill during my free period and work on some other things.
Nix: She dumped the tray into the trash? Hey! The cafeteria needs to reuse those trays!
Odd Della Robbia's Point of View
I and the gang
Nix: Seriously?
were heading towards the lunch room, but along the way we heard screaming.
Nix: Oh, thank god, X.A.N.A.’s finally here! Maybe something interesting will actually happen now! About time X.A.N.A. attacked.
I quickly took off towards the sound. As I got closer I could hear Sissi's laughter.
Nix: It... it could be a polymorphic clone...! You never know?
Rounding the corner shortly before Ulrich and the others. Standing there sopping wet was Rose.
Nix: Is she possessed by X.A.N.A.?
Her white shirt just clung to her frame as tears ran down her face.
Nix: Damn it... *disappointed*
How the heck is the white shirt clinging to her frame? She’s wearing a CORSET under it. Let alone, a JACKET over it. Why isn't the jacket wet. Why is only the shirt?
On the ground was a piece of paper with a huge blob on it.
Nix: What the heck is the blob? Oh, it's the ink smeared, huh?
Looking up I seen Sissi standing at the window with a bucket in her hands with both her cronies flanking either side of her. All three were laughing.
Nix: From what I can remember, I don’t think Sissi, Nicholas, and Herb laugh after doing something that mean. They usually just look smug, but don’t outright laugh. Also, I don’t understand why Sissi is targeting Rose. She’s never been this mean to Yumi, and Yumi is the girl she is the meanest toward. Rose doesn’t pose a threat to her affections for Ulrick like Yumi does because she has shown no inclination towards him.
"Oops, I'm so sorry. I mistook you for a giant stain, freak~" cackled Sissi.
Nix: Well said, Sissi! You’ve correctly identified the giant stain on your universe. Unfortunately, you seem to have turned into a Scary-Sue in the process...
I could feel my blood boil as my hands became fists.
"Three hours... I've been working on that drawing for three hours straight..." muttered Rose as her tears continued to fall. She bent down and quickly grabbed her drenched things and ran quickly.
Nix: I do somewhat sympathize for the loss of her art, but I don’t really like her. I feel no attachment to Rose, so it’s a little hard for me to feel bad for her.
"Man, Sissi. Just when we were thinking you couldn't be any more of a bitch." Hissed Yumi as she crossed her arms.
Nix: Hey! No cursing in my childhood! And Yumi's the least likely to cuss, because she’s one of the more respectful of the Lyoko Gang.
Sissi just scuffed and moved away from the window.
I just lost my appetite.
Nix: LIES AND SLANDER! Odd NEVER loses his appetite! That’s one of his quirks! He’s a black hole! X.A.N.A. doesn't make him lose his appetite!
The first chapter of my Odd Della Robbia series! Took me 3 hours to write, so please enjoy.
Nix: Really? I thought you just smashed your butt on the keyboard and hit submit.
Also this is what Rose is wearing/looks like: http:/www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=34327200
Nix: Rose obviously has no idea how to accessorize.
Here's another picture of Rose: http:/okami-rain.deviantart.com/art/NCIS-Abby-115105498
credit goes to stalcry who's allowing me to use it.
Doesn't she look like Abby from NCIS? I just love how Abby looks and sounds so I'm basing my OC off of her. So yeah...
Nix: Leave NCIS outta this! Abby can pull off the goth look! Your Sue cannot.
The series doesn't follow anything in the show so the plot is all mine but the idea of Code Lyoko belongs to their respective parties.
BTW,
if anyone wants to know what Rose's last name is it happens to be German. I couldn't think of a great surname so I used my Great-Great grandmother's on my grandpa's side's maiden name, which happens to be Zander.
Nix: Why should I care about your Great-Great grandmother on your grandpa’s side’s maiden name?
Lawlz, a German and an Italian
Nix: Ulrich is already German. You're Sue is still unnecessary.
(if you look at Odd's last name the Della means Of while the Robbia means Madder in Italian).
Nix: Yes, Odd is Italian. Congratulations on knowing that. And there are more translations than just that.
Della:
(adj) any, some, whatever
(prep) of the; of, belonging to; on, about; in, at; by; from, coming from, native to; due to, caused by (Grammar)
Robbia:
nf. madder, herbaceous climbing plant which bears clusters of yellow flowers.
Ooo, I think I just made an APH reference in there somewhere... XD
Nix: And with that, I’m done with this chapter. Completely, utterly done. Now, I need to recover.
Rated M to be safe. An Odd/OC series. Rose has a similer background as Odd.She's strange, just like Odd, but smart, unlike Odd.
Nix: Which, of course, makes you superior to him, huh? *humph*
Romance at first sight? Odd's the Mad Hatter, Rose is Alice... Nothing like Wonderland when we have LYOKO! Oh, and Kiwi...
Nix: I have a feeling that Odd would be very offended by Kiwi being tacked onto the end like this. Why is she Alice? Alice/Hatter isn’t canon at all. WHY?
An Odd Wonderland- Chapter One: Welcome To Kadic... or Not...
Nix: I can't believe how creative the author is! I could never aspire to be this gifted at naming a fanfiction.
Odd Della Robbia's Point of View
It was a normal day so far. I was sitting in Mrs. Hertz's class with Ulrich, Jeremy,
Nix: I believe it’s spelled “Jeremie...” This is actually one of the debates of the series. Some fans think it’s spelled “Jeremy,” “Jeremie,” or “Jérémie.” However, I've noticed that the English subtitles for the French version spell it "Jeremie." The wikis for the show also spell it the same way more often then not.
and Aelita. But I continued to ignore whatever our teacher was saying as I continued to draw Kiwi instead of taking notes.
Nix: While, this is something Odd has done before, it's dumb because Mrs. Hertz never says anything to Odd about it. Teachers generally don't like it when you draw instead of taking notes... not that I would know ANYTHING about that. *awkward cough*
That is, until Ulrich elbowed me in the side. "What?" I asked, looking over at him. He nodded towards the front.
Nix: (as Ulrich): Sorry, Odd, but the Sue’s here...
"Class, we have a new student joining us. Miss Zander, you may come in now."
Nix: Here we go...
In walked a girl with black hair that was longer than Yumi's. She was smiling while she stood. Already Sissi and her cronies were snickering at the girl's choice of clothing. On her back was a casket shaped black backpack. She was also wearing a white Jen's Pirate Booty Butterfly Top over a black corset top, what looked like pirate boots, a very small hooded jacket, and black skinny jeans with what looked to be voodoo dolls and blood splatter on the butt.
Nix: Considering that most of the cast are between the ages of twelve and thirteen... I’m not surprised that Sissi is snickering at her. After all, she has voodoo dolls and blood on her butt!
Now, imagine wearing a black corset under a butterfly shirt. Add skinny jeans with blood and voodoo dolls, a casket shaped backpack, a small jacket with a hood, and pirate boots. And finally, imagine a thirteen year old wearing this. Now, how ridiculous does that sound?
"I'm not that really new, Mrs. Hertz. I'm just changing classes so I'm around people my own age instead of the older kids."
Nix: Usually higher grades have more advanced lessons. If you were around people older than you, you must have been in a higher grade. Why drop all that so you could be around people your own age? Oh, wait, I know. It’s so she could meet her twu luv!
She explained before looking back at us. "Hi, my name is Rose Zander. I love flowers, video games, different styles of art, cats and dogs, music, relaxing with friends, hanging with my parents, playing music, and all around having a good time." Sissi huffed in the front and stuck her nose in the air. Man was she annoying.
Nix: Okay. Odd may not like Sissi and enjoy making fun of her, but he is NOT attuned to every little thing she does. He doesn’t care about her THAT much.
"Well then Miss Zander there's and open seat next to Mr. Della Robbia; raise your hand Mr. Della Robbia."
Nix: Of course there is...
I raised my hand. Rose smiled and made her way down the aisle, only to have Sissi stick her foot out and trip the poor girl.
Nix: ...Please don’t make Sissi hate and bother the Sue for no reason... please... On the other hand, Sissi could correctly detect the Sue. Good job, Sissi!
And the poor girl? She has voodoo dolls and BLOOD on her ass! What kind of home do you think she comes from?
Some people broke down and laughed while Mrs. Hertz gave Sissi detention.
Nix: Just for tripping someone? Jeez.
Rose slowly got up and dusted off her pants.
Nix: But neglected to dust off the VOODOO DOLLS AND BLOOD!!
I'm never going to let that go.
It didn't seem to faze her one bit. She turned and looked down at Sissi. "I'm so sorry. I didn't see your big foot there. Please accept my apology." I laughed in my hand along with Ulrich. With a sickly-sweet smile did she turn back around and take her seat on my left.
I could smell her perfume, it smelled like dying roses,
Nix: Dying roses smell exactly the same as normal roses. But, since Odd felt the need to label them as dying, I'm going to assume that he thinks she stinks.
the Earth after it just rained, and a small hint of winter. I rested my head on my fist as I went back to drawing.
Rose's Point of View
During class I did nothing but draw seeing as I already had the notes for this class.
Nix: How do you already have the notes for this class? Different classes take notes at different paces.
So I just drew the two boys on my right. I was guessing that the one with the blond hair with a purple diamond in the center would happen to be Mr. Della Robbia, but I wasn't all too sure on the light brunette. But I drew then both anyways.
Nix: Of course, she only draws the characters that are going to end up becoming her friends! It's not like she'd ever draw Herb or Nicholas.
I was using my Visconti Alchemy Vermeil - Limited Edition Sterling Silver Fountain Pen;
Nix: ...*casually punches the Sue in the face* You do not, under any circumstances, use a pen that costs 5,880 DOLLARS TO DOODLE IN CLASS YOU LITTLE OSTENTATIOUS SHITAO;IJWA’FA’
it was the only thing I ever used to draw.
Nix: *says very slowly* Until it runs out of ink. 'Cause, you know, that happens.
There are two ink colors on that pen. The main color is red, the secondary color is gold. She claims that she does all of her drawings with that pen... What? Is black outlining not good enough for her? Just because the ink is pretty and spshul, doesn’t make it aesthetically pleasing when you’re doing it with a simple drawing.
I crossed my legs as I turned slightly in my seat so I could see them a bit better. Then I continued on with my drawing as my tongue ring vibrated in my mouth.
Nix: A... tongue ring is... vibrating in your mouth...? I don't think it's supposed to do that. ...Wait a minute, is she supposed to be a goth? I couldn’t tell because I was too busy trying to figure out why the hell she has voodoo dolls on her ass and getting pissed off over her misuse of an expensive pen.
Soon the bell rung. Gathering all my books and everything did I leave class and head to the art department to turn in my assignment early.
Nix: Because the Sue is a perfect student. I dunno about this though. When I took Art I and II in school, it wasn't often that someone took it home with them. That's because our class was graded per day on participation whenever we had a project. If you had nothing to do, you started to lose points. Granted, it might not work the same way here, but still. Teachers don't like students who sit around and do nothing.
We had to do a portrait of people really important of us. I had done my parents sitting in a Victorian setting. My mother was dressed as an aristocratic lady sitting down on red velvet cushioned French chair. My dad stood right behind her on her left side, looking like a young lord.
Nix: OH MY GOD, HER ARTWORK SOUNDS SO PRETENTIOUS!
Mrs. McCann was sitting at her desk grading papers.
Nix: Of course, she has an OC as the art teacher...
She was wearing a red pencil skirt, a bright orange button up, and a loose black silk tie around her neck as long silk curls of melted dark chocolate spilled over her shoulders while adjusting her glasses.
Nix: Ouch, melted chocolate can get pretty hot. Better get that cleaned up. And why is the melted chocolate adjusting her glasses?
I knocked on the door frame before entering. Mrs. McCann looked up. "Oh, Rose! How is my star student?" she asked.
Nix: Oh, of course she is. Because just being "okay" at drawing is unacceptable for a Sue, right?
"I'm fine Mrs. McCann. I was just dropping off my assignment early." I handed over the painted portrait. She just beamed with joy. "You are such a gifted artist, Rose~ One of these days you'll hit it big and I'll be buying one of your paintings and hang it in my house!" she cooed.
Nix: *squicked* It sounds the teacher is flirting with her... It might just be because I associate the "~" symbol with a playful or flirty tone.
"Both you and Odd are at the top of my class! Oh, you two should partner up for the next project I have in mind; it'll be right up both of your allies!" Mrs. McCann clapped her hands together. "After all you both are in the same class~"
I never noticed another good artist other than myself in class.
Nix: (as Rose): Someone as skilled as me? Unheard of!
"How come I've never met him?" I asked. Her eyes widen.
"You've never met Odd?" I pulled my blue painted lips in a thin line as I frowned.
Nix: Well, now you can add blue painted lips to the image I mentioned before. In all honesty. I have a feeling that Odd would get freaked out by the idea of dating a goffick. I mean, he’d probably find the dark clothing and blue lips creepy.
Also, how do you miss Odd? Everyone at Kadic Academy looks normal and has normal hairstyles (sans Aelita). Odd looks like this:
How the HELL do you miss this kid with that kind of hair?
"Well, now, that's just a big shock." She looked up at the clock. "Oh, you best be going otherwise you might miss lunch."
Bidding Mrs. McCann farewell before I left; heading to the lunch room.
Grabbing my lunch I sat at an empty table with my drawing right next to me. I was multitasking; shoving food into my mouth while using my favorite pen to finish the finishing details of the drawing I started on during Mrs. Hertz's class.
Nix: *becomes horrified* You’re going to get crumbs all over your artwork! Why would you do that in the cafeteria? You could easily spill your drink and then completely ruin the drawing you made with your 5,880 DOLLAR PEN WHAT IS THIS BULLSHIT!?
It was only shading that was left and it only took my ten minutes to finish that and my food.
Nix: What kind of shading? Since she's using a pen to do it, is she hatching, cross-hatching, contour-hatching, scumbling, or stippling? Because, you know, you can’t gradient shade with a pen, no matter how expensive it is.
Dumping my tray I quickly left the lunch room and headed back towards the dorms to chill during my free period and work on some other things.
Nix: She dumped the tray into the trash? Hey! The cafeteria needs to reuse those trays!
Odd Della Robbia's Point of View
I and the gang
Nix: Seriously?
were heading towards the lunch room, but along the way we heard screaming.
Nix: Oh, thank god, X.A.N.A.’s finally here! Maybe something interesting will actually happen now! About time X.A.N.A. attacked.
I quickly took off towards the sound. As I got closer I could hear Sissi's laughter.
Nix: It... it could be a polymorphic clone...! You never know?
Rounding the corner shortly before Ulrich and the others. Standing there sopping wet was Rose.
Nix: Is she possessed by X.A.N.A.?
Her white shirt just clung to her frame as tears ran down her face.
Nix: Damn it... *disappointed*
How the heck is the white shirt clinging to her frame? She’s wearing a CORSET under it. Let alone, a JACKET over it. Why isn't the jacket wet. Why is only the shirt?
On the ground was a piece of paper with a huge blob on it.
Nix: What the heck is the blob? Oh, it's the ink smeared, huh?
Looking up I seen Sissi standing at the window with a bucket in her hands with both her cronies flanking either side of her. All three were laughing.
Nix: From what I can remember, I don’t think Sissi, Nicholas, and Herb laugh after doing something that mean. They usually just look smug, but don’t outright laugh. Also, I don’t understand why Sissi is targeting Rose. She’s never been this mean to Yumi, and Yumi is the girl she is the meanest toward. Rose doesn’t pose a threat to her affections for Ulrick like Yumi does because she has shown no inclination towards him.
"Oops, I'm so sorry. I mistook you for a giant stain, freak~" cackled Sissi.
Nix: Well said, Sissi! You’ve correctly identified the giant stain on your universe. Unfortunately, you seem to have turned into a Scary-Sue in the process...
I could feel my blood boil as my hands became fists.
"Three hours... I've been working on that drawing for three hours straight..." muttered Rose as her tears continued to fall. She bent down and quickly grabbed her drenched things and ran quickly.
Nix: I do somewhat sympathize for the loss of her art, but I don’t really like her. I feel no attachment to Rose, so it’s a little hard for me to feel bad for her.
"Man, Sissi. Just when we were thinking you couldn't be any more of a bitch." Hissed Yumi as she crossed her arms.
Nix: Hey! No cursing in my childhood! And Yumi's the least likely to cuss, because she’s one of the more respectful of the Lyoko Gang.
Sissi just scuffed and moved away from the window.
I just lost my appetite.
Nix: LIES AND SLANDER! Odd NEVER loses his appetite! That’s one of his quirks! He’s a black hole! X.A.N.A. doesn't make him lose his appetite!
The first chapter of my Odd Della Robbia series! Took me 3 hours to write, so please enjoy.
Nix: Really? I thought you just smashed your butt on the keyboard and hit submit.
Also this is what Rose is wearing/looks like: http:/www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=34327200
Nix: Rose obviously has no idea how to accessorize.
Here's another picture of Rose: http:/okami-rain.deviantart.com/art/NCIS-Abby-115105498
credit goes to stalcry who's allowing me to use it.
Doesn't she look like Abby from NCIS? I just love how Abby looks and sounds so I'm basing my OC off of her. So yeah...
Nix: Leave NCIS outta this! Abby can pull off the goth look! Your Sue cannot.
The series doesn't follow anything in the show so the plot is all mine but the idea of Code Lyoko belongs to their respective parties.
BTW,
if anyone wants to know what Rose's last name is it happens to be German. I couldn't think of a great surname so I used my Great-Great grandmother's on my grandpa's side's maiden name, which happens to be Zander.
Nix: Why should I care about your Great-Great grandmother on your grandpa’s side’s maiden name?
Lawlz, a German and an Italian
Nix: Ulrich is already German. You're Sue is still unnecessary.
(if you look at Odd's last name the Della means Of while the Robbia means Madder in Italian).
Nix: Yes, Odd is Italian. Congratulations on knowing that. And there are more translations than just that.
Della:
(adj) any, some, whatever
(prep) of the; of, belonging to; on, about; in, at; by; from, coming from, native to; due to, caused by (Grammar)
Robbia:
nf. madder, herbaceous climbing plant which bears clusters of yellow flowers.
Ooo, I think I just made an APH reference in there somewhere... XD
Nix: And with that, I’m done with this chapter. Completely, utterly done. Now, I need to recover.