fic for ohmiyaddict

Jun 24, 2015 03:18

For: ohmiyaddict
From: astrangerenters

Title: Worrywart
Pairing/Focus: Ohmiya
Rating: PG
Warnings: Light drama of the hurt/comfort variety.
Summary: Nights in Hawaii. Comfort that Nino didn’t necessarily ask for, but liked enough not to mind.
Notes: For ohmiyaddict. Happy Nino Exchange! You said you like stories set during concerts/tours, so I hope you will enjoy this. Set post- ( Read more... )

r: pg, *year: 2015, p: nino/ohno satoshi

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ohmiyaddict June 24 2015, 10:30:25 UTC
AHHHHHHHHH!!!! Thank you so sooo much for this!!!!! I love it!!!!

I love how simple and yet intricate it is! I love the concert setting!!! I love the delicate relationship you've set between the two, and how genuine it feels! I can imagine them so clearly acting like this with each other! Ohno upfront and down to earth, and Nino mildly exasperated but caring. It's really well-put in this fic!!

And the last part!!! I was melting in front of my computer!!!! The kiss on the shoulder!!?? ☆*:.。. o(≧▽≦)o .。.:*☆ So much love!!!!

Thank you!!!!!!! otsukaresama desu!!!!! <3

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astrangerenters July 2 2015, 18:24:52 UTC
Yay, I'm so happy you enjoyed it! I very very very VERY rarely write Ohmiya, so I'm very glad that it worked for you, since you are obviously a huge fan of them. I wanted to make sure I got them right :)

Thank you!!!

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ohmiyaddict July 6 2015, 09:39:49 UTC
Yes, you definitely got them right!! Thanks again!!! ^___^

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nicefinalbeam June 24 2015, 11:15:35 UTC
This is so subtle and sweet and lovely. I really love that even after going out and getting nice and drunk Ohno still comes to Nino's door to be with him at the end of the day. And that shoulder kiss! ♥

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astrangerenters July 2 2015, 18:29:28 UTC
Thank you!! I was definitely aiming for subtle and quiet on this one :)

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lover_youshould June 29 2015, 23:22:33 UTC
Ahh, this is so lovely and sweet. I love your Nino, and I love your Ohno, and Ohno repeating that Nino was missed and saying that he worries about them made my heart yell obscenities. This is so wonderful. <3 Thank you for sharing!

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astrangerenters July 2 2015, 18:31:14 UTC
Aww, thanks very much! Hawaii Ohno is quite possibly the best Ohno. ALL OF THE FEELINGS :D

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airairo June 30 2015, 14:42:01 UTC
This was so soft and lovely! <3

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astrangerenters July 2 2015, 18:31:53 UTC
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it :)

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yumenosete July 1 2015, 01:32:46 UTC

Incredible!

Sometimes a fic doesn't need too much but the characters themselves and it shows here. Their personalities are spot on.

(I love the shoulder kiss the best. It speaks volumes! I can't even get over it yet!)


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astrangerenters July 2 2015, 18:32:14 UTC
Thank you! I don't write a lot of Ohmiya, so I'm very happy to know they read like themselves :)

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