fic for lysanderpuck

Jun 23, 2014 22:06

For: lysanderpuck
From: alphie_damiek

Title: A Page from the Garden of Earthly Delights
Pairing/Focus: Nino/everyone, side Aiba/Sho, Jun/Sho, Aiba/Ohno, basically everyone/everyone
Rating: NC-17 for language and sexual situations
Warnings: Polyamory, rimming, dirty talk, biting, spanking
Summary: Nino, Aiba, and Jun spend their nights going from club to club, finding ( Read more... )

p: nino/aiba masaki/matsumoto jun, *year: 2014, p: nino/arashi, r: nc-17, p: nino/ohno satoshi, p: nino/sakurai sho

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lysanderpuck June 24 2014, 02:32:03 UTC
GOD HELP ME ANON THIS IS EVERYTHING I HAVE WISHED FOR

omg so this may have ruined my day because i read it first thing in the morning and i have work and class and anon!!!! do you know me? because i love this and i love you

i was going to highlight my favorite lines but actually it'd be the whole thing and i actually do have stuff i should be doing so instead i'm just going to yell about my favorite parts

NINO AND OHNO FUCKING IN THE ALLEYWAY AND AIBA JUST GOES 'HEY YA'LL' oh aiba bless your open-minded heart

how did you know that i love naked dudes covered in paint

he noticed specks of neon pink paint still attached to his dick. god help me anon if you used some sort of psychic powers on me to find out what i like KEEP IT GOING

everyone sitting in the kitchen all "wow sex is great, sex with each other is the greatest, life rules" A++++

anon i love you

edit: the second time around i slapped myself in the face at "I don't care about their size, i just like them tight"

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alphie_damiek July 13 2014, 00:54:39 UTC
I'M SO SORRY IT TOOK SO LONG FOR ME TO RESPOND TO YOUR KIND WORDS ;3;3;3;

I was giggling the whole time I read your comment because I honestly didn't know if what I had written was what you were hoping for in your exchange fic, so it was really reassuring to hear that you enjoyed yourself during this exchange. XD

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faiee June 24 2014, 06:21:45 UTC
This was great and the last line had me giggling! There were a ton of good bits but Ohno and Aiba doing introductions in an alleyway at the most inconvenient time ever was epic! :3

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alphie_damiek July 13 2014, 00:55:12 UTC
Lol that alley scene is definitely a fan favorite. XD Thank you for your kind comments!

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nicefinalbeam June 25 2014, 02:47:08 UTC
Anon, this was FUN. I'm sorry I don't have more to say than that atm, but it was such a great read :D

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alphie_damiek July 13 2014, 00:55:36 UTC
FUN is good. It's a good word, and I appreciate you taking the time to comment. :D

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astrangerenters June 28 2014, 04:15:25 UTC
Oh my god, this was awesome. And FUN! And my favorite part was definitely Aiba and Ohno's handshake, what kind of timing Aiba Masaki, my god?!

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alphie_damiek July 13 2014, 00:56:18 UTC
Hahahahaha but it's Aiba, so of course you have no choice but to forgive him. ♥

Thank you for commenting!

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cutselvage June 29 2014, 06:28:10 UTC
omg I had a grin on my face from the opening line right to the end - this was just so happy, as well as being super super hot. I cackled so loud at he noticed specks of neon pink paint still attached to his dick. so great. thanks for this!

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alphie_damiek July 13 2014, 00:58:35 UTC
Thank you for commenting; I didn't realize the speckled paint would have that much of an impact on some readers. XDD I'm glad the fic made you happy!!

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