fic for clipsie

[nino_mod]

For: clipsie
From: ltgmars

Title: Every Morning
Pairing/Focus: Ninomiya/Ohno/Matsumoto, one-sided Ninomiya/Okada, implied Okada/Sakamoto
Rating: PG-13 for sexual references, brief gory imagery, dark themes
Warnings: Mentions of character death, medical experimentation, and moral ambiguity. Kind of twisted!
Summary: Human cloning was still a sensitive subject.

Comments

[ltgmars]

There are so many ethical questions involved when it comes to cloning, so it was fun to think those through and despite that try to write from the perspective of a scientist who just wants to do the world some good. I'm glad it worked for you! Thanks for reading. :3

[clipsie]

I had a comment written, and was slowly adding to it over the evening, but then I had to force my browser to close after I froze it with an excess of Sakamoto for reasons... OMG! ANYWAY!

Anon, it's like you know me~ Do you know me? Such a mystery, but seriously, this is perfection. It is eerie and sci-fi, and the fact it came off a mention of Multiplicity makes it even better! Especially when I consider I know few people who actually have seen that movie, but anyway~ Clones are such a fascinating subject and my goodness, you did it right and I'm so fucking excited about that

[ltgmars]

Nfufufu I suppose it's hard to be truly anonymous when we know each other this well, but yesssss it seems this fic was successful! There are a lot of unanswered questions when it comes to their stories and motivations, and I kind of like it that way -- thirsting for more is always a compliment, so I'm glad it delivered in that sense.

And yeah, I figured you'd enjoy Sakamoto here. :P Especially a not-so-squeaky-clean Sakamoto, with something dark and sinister hidden away where you can barely see it and Nino doesn't suspect foul play until it's too late. >:D

YOU'RE GREAT and I'm so glad I could write something you enjoyed. ♥

[lover_youshould]

!!!!! THIS IS SO CREEPY AND WONDERFUL AND GREAT. I love the routine and the haunting way you describe it in the beginning. I love Nino's love for Okada. I love the super weird and kind of tragic feel of Ohno and Jun and to a lesser extent Aiba (I mean, Aiba's case is still sad, but Ohno and Jun HELP NINO DISPOSE OF THEIR OLD BODIES AND WATCH THEIR NEW BODIES BEING CREATED omggggg and then Jun worrying about not being good enough skjdhshfjkf my heart). And of course, the twist!! I wonder how much of Nino's ~upgrades~ are actual upgrades and how much comes from Sakamoto not wanting Nino to encroach on his job/Okada, since obviously he understands Nino's own desire to adjust Ohno and Jun for ~personal reasons (and then omg that line about Nino hoping to never have to live through the moment again -- Nino didn't anyone ever tell you to be careful what you wish for!!!).

THIS IS SO GOOD, SERIOUSLY. Thank you for sharing!! ♥

[ltgmars]

This fic is super duper not what I usually write, so it was a fun challenge to try to make my writing style dark enough to work with the storyline. XD I'm glad you picked up on the routine -- because Nino changed so much over time (for reasons known and unknown to him nfufu) that I feel like at some point, he would have lost his optimism and enthusiasm, so I tried to make that clear in writing. Though of course perhaps there was a different reason he changed~ ohoho.

Thank you for reading! ♥

[jadeswallow]

Sorry for this late comment, but I just want to let you know that I really enjoyed reading this! A great story about cloning, from Nino's apathetic behavior to his infatuation with Okada, his jealousy about Okada-Sakamato relationships, his complicated feelings for Ohno and Jun, to the detail about how Ohno and Jun drag their previous bodies to be burned, every time. It's certainly a creepy story, but a great and memorable one! I love how you play with Nino's name, changing it into Ichi and San, and that's how we realize that Nino is an experiment himself. Thanks for writing this one for Ninoexchange, especially for Ninoexchange. :)

[ltgmars]

Nino just has a lot of feelings! Even if he doesn't realize he didn't originally start off as "Nino". :P This really isn't the kind of fic that usually shows up at Nino Exchange, so I'm happy to see that you read it and enjoyed it. Thanks for your comment! ♥

[ninokazumiya]

damn! it was like major plot twist down there! i keep wondering how this one ends, and then BAM! wow!

its a surprise to discover that nino was an experiment himself. and regarding how ohno and jun help to carry his own body for upgrade, i wonder does ohno and jun also bring nino body for upgrades?!

and the ending, the ending, how did they upgrades nino? how they change nino to sannomiya?? did ohno and jun into this also as they were tghtr the night before?! lol this fic makes me asks for more... hahaha...

and well yeah, i know this fic is long ago, and hahaha, i still want to comment.. maybe it takes u to read ur fic again to refresh what i comment here.. lol. hahaha