Season of Mists, Chapter Four (REVISED) (PART TWO)

[ninjasnano]

Title: Season of Mists, Chapter Four: And the Season of Mists
Author: lookninjas
Character/Pairing(s): Gwen, Andy, John Hart, Jack Harkness, Archie (Torchwood Two), Dr. Simon Tau (OC), Dr. Derrial Shepherd (OC), Jayne Warren (OC), the Doctor (Eleventh), Dream of the Endless, Ianto Jones
Rating: R
Warnings: Spoilers for Children of Earth. Character death

Comments

[fide_et_spe]

I've just realised I was holding my breath. This really is so brilliant. I love all the ideas, the suspense and sense of peril. Such clever descriptions, I love Archie's flat, and the OC's, including Minerva.

Looking forward to more..

[sbs_01]

This was excellent! Will there be a continuation of this or is this a complete fiction?

[rexluscus]

This story is so engrossing. It really works as a fix-it, perhaps because it's so nightmarish. One is wary of things that come too easily. :)

[lone_star_woman]

Wow. That was quite amazing. Well-plotted, suspenseful, clever. I really like how you've incorporated Jack's missing years into the plot. Well done.

[mcparrot]

Oh oh oh....
tears in my eyes and a lump in my throat.
Fan...bloody...tastic story.
So rich and full and clever and sad and hopeful and wonderful
(and what did naughty Jack tell himself?)
I am so pleased I read this.