Items of note: The chapter ordering changed; you didn't miss anything. I went back and divided chapter 5 into two chapters and re-numbered all the ones that followed
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it could be my imagination...or something, but as i was reading this, i was thinking that your writing is getting better. it could be because everything is more established at this point, and so it's easier to let the characters and the story...breath? but i thought there was some good description going on. and the characters felt real without being caricature-ish. well, except redrum and slay. but they're supposed to, right?
lmao god yeah they're supposed to. it's what makes them so great.
It pleases me to hear that! I'm actually really fond of the writing in that last bit because I was doing something completely different for me (notice that there is not a single visual description in that scene).
I always struggle with this feeling that my descriptive talents are just not quite Good Enough so it's nice to hear somebody thinks I've got my good moments.
well, it's true that your descriptive talents do not blaze brighter than the sun, but that just means buckling down and putting solid effort into beating the crap out of it, ay?
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It pleases me to hear that! I'm actually really fond of the writing in that last bit because I was doing something completely different for me (notice that there is not a single visual description in that scene).
I always struggle with this feeling that my descriptive talents are just not quite Good Enough so it's nice to hear somebody thinks I've got my good moments.
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