Angel's Creed, nine

[theguindo]

Which is actually relatively short and not very plotty at all 8(a but it has a lot of SFC Tramden jokes so that makes up for it. 7,890 words.

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Comments

[philled2thebrim]

you know, i am not feeling particularly impressed or intimidated by spirits at this point. they seem rather...childish? immature? something along those lines.

[theguindo]

Melusine is supposed to give you that impression. Are you getting it from all of them, or just from her?

[philled2thebrim]

well, her especially. but the others do not impress me either. they're just kind of there. i get the impression i should find something mystically impressive or especially intimidating about them. or maybe i should be getting some sort of special vibe from them while they're present. but when they're part of the story, they just seem like any other person, only weird-looking.

[philled2thebrim]

actually, i just looked back at ophelia, and she seemed okay (spirit-wise). so maybe i was just especially unimpressed by snake-face. but that could be because you don't spend a lot of time on description, of demeanor and facial reactions and such, so i didn't get much of an impression. i mean, i only get so much from what people say, when i can't hear how they're saying it.