Being Fair, Part 2

[nine_ten_11th]

Title: Being Fair, Part 2
Author: nine_ten_11th
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: oral sex?
Summary: An apology, and tentative reconciliation.

"I have wronged that man, and I shall never forgive him for it." (The Brothers Karamazov)

Comments

[light_frost]

OH MY GOD the lovey-dovey-ness of this was overwhelmingly amazing. Just--just--oh my God--with the stuff--and the things--please excuse me, you just kind of melted my brain there. :D It's amazing how you can fit so much in such a short story.

[nine_ten_11th]

Thanks! Always happy to help with a bit of brain-melting.

[silvermoon_06]

Wow! This was just so absolutely beautiful and so very sweet! It was just so lovely how the Doctor was apologising to the Master for scaring him into thinking he was going to hurt him, and the Master asking him why he always forgave him after all the terrible things he'd done to him

[nine_ten_11th]

You always say the kindest things! I was going for something sort of sweet and sad, and I'm glad it worked for you!

[edzel2]

What they both said... truly amazing. I'm often none too sure about the lovey-dovey stuff; somehow it doesn't always ring quite true for me because I think they'd find it hard to be that honest with each other after their looong and complicated history. But how you've written it, it works. Oh, and it's hot as anything...
:-)

[nine_ten_11th]

Thanks! I don't really think of them as being particularly lovey-dovey, because that would involve ignoring too much of what they've been through, but I felt like an intense moment could force them into at least a couple hours of open-ness. And, hopefully, hotness. ;)

[lokiiago]

"Instead, he felt the Doctor gently massaging his back.

“I never would have,” the Doctor said, with a quaver in his voice. “I never, never would have.” He kissed the Master’s back. “I’m so sorry.” "

MY FAVE. Eeeee I've always loved crying ukes but crying semes are almost better <3

[nine_ten_11th]

I do not know what "ukes" and "semes" are. Does that make me stupid? ;)

[lokiiago]

Uke = sub
Seme = top

in yaoi terms :P
which is gay hentai
which is anime porn

:)

[iris234]

There are so sad atmosphere between the doctor and the master...the doctor is so gentle to the master....I love it！！！Especially “I care for you”，Oh，that made me crying... uhm，sorry for my poor grammar....

In a word, good work！

[nine_ten_11th]

Thank you! I'm touched.

[iris234]

Please go on，I really really want to read the next part.