pray for the thunder and the rain (Sam/Dean, R)

Apr 12, 2011 01:03

pray for the thunder and the rain
Pairing: Sam/Dean (Wincest)
Warnings: incest, underage sex
Summary: They're soldiers in the trenches, seeking proof of life; they're teenage and desperate, driven mad by the dry summer heat; they're two people and one person all at once, and so how could this end any other way? .
Word Count: 5,879
A/N: Thanks to immortal_lightsRead more... )

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tabaqui April 12 2011, 23:15:53 UTC
Oh, lovely. And heartbreaking. Oh, Dean. And Sam growing up and inevitably away, even though Dean's sure he can make him stay.
*sniffle*

Dean gets Sam to count the time between, like they used to, and Dad shakes his head at the two of them, smiling a little. Us against the world, Dean thinks, and the three of them race towards the storm. No slowing down, no room for hesitation in a life like this.

He lets out a whoop of laughter and hangs on for the ride.

Excellent stuff.

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escherzo April 14 2011, 04:33:41 UTC
Thank you!

On another note, I have to admit I was really excited to see this comment because I absolutely love your Wolfpack-verse. /fanboy

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tabaqui April 14 2011, 05:01:54 UTC
Eeeeee!
Thank you! It's always kinda fun to find someone who's read you when you're just out enjoying fic. :)

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escherzo April 14 2011, 05:07:03 UTC
I'm generally too shy to actually comment on fic, but I had to mention, because it's one of the series I've been really enjoying this week at work (I listen to podfics to pass the time most days). :)

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rivkat April 13 2011, 16:08:06 UTC
I really love the mood of this, Dean's slow slide, his desire to be recognized as a hero, the ways in which he sees Sam--very nice!

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escherzo April 14 2011, 04:33:49 UTC
Thank you!

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kassidy62 April 13 2011, 23:32:56 UTC
this is so beautifully done - it sets the scenes so well, and I can just see them. Love this Dean POV, too.

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escherzo April 14 2011, 04:33:57 UTC
Thank you!

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escherzo April 15 2011, 03:09:46 UTC
Thank you! And many thanks for the imaginary pie :)

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escherzo April 15 2011, 03:09:29 UTC
Freud really would love them.

Thank you <3

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