Ripped Jeans

Mar 24, 2011 01:03

Title: Ripped Jeans
Pairing: Tegoshi Yuya/Maki Horikita
Rating: NC-17
Summary: He hadn't heard from Maki since they had worked together. All the text said was 'It's been a while. Eat with me?'
A/N: My je_whiteday fic for ryogrande. I had a lot of fun writing this. It was my first het smut, and I adore Tegomaki so much. Please, everyone enjoy! Thank you to jayeanne for beta- ( Read more... )

p:tegomaki, tegoshi yuya, fanfiction, maki horikita, l:oneshot, r:nc-17

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ryogrande March 24 2011, 13:37:39 UTC
I STILL LOVE THIS. <333333333333333 SO GLAD WE'RE FRIENDS.

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nillahoney March 27 2011, 18:35:24 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. I was pretty nervous at first, but it ended up being pretty easy to write ^_^

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fairy_of_lust March 27 2011, 00:02:45 UTC
Aww, my first HET ever!!! *v*
I buried all my doubts and now I can say I loved it!
And Tegoshi seemed so anew for me in this fic! I was so used to read his more naive and childish side and this more manly was quite surprising! But very nice, I have to say!! ^v^ I prefered this one indeed, and it fitted more! >.<

I liked Meisa's cameo too. I like Kuroki-Horikita friendship, they have quite a nice relationship in my opinion and having Meisa cook for Maki was so cute! And the fact that there's probably more than that was.. LOL <3

I really appreciated that Maki wasn't a childish girl and stuff, because it really doesn't suit her! You read the characters very well!!!

Another great job from you <3
Thank you thank you thank you for sharing my dear!

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nillahoney March 27 2011, 18:40:14 UTC
I get the first! Yay! I'm so glad you like it! *_* Thank you so much for reading it.
I love a more mature Tegoshi. Actually outside of the other exchanges I've signed up for, the fic I'm working on is pretty Tegoshi-centric. And he's not quite like he is in this fic, but I don't think he's really naive or childish in the normal way either. It might be a while before it's out though, since I'm writing other things too, and those have a time limit. Heh.
I'm glad you liked Meisa. I was kind of nervous about including her, but she seems like a popular addition, heh.
Thank you so much for commenting. I always like your comments. ^.^

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fairy_of_lust March 27 2011, 20:54:34 UTC
It sounds interesting! I'm looking forward to reading that and the other fics you're working on ;D
Have you applied for the Kanjani8 one, too? I read the deadline is a bit far, something like june? Well, probably it seems far only if you're the reader, but for the writer is completely different! xD
Even if you haven't applied, I'd so like to read a Kanjani fic from you, or perhaps you aren't familiar with them? Err, I'm a little biased, because I like them so much and I like any pairing!
But my only true fav is and will always be Koki of course! And I will ship Akako forever. Honestly, they fit angst so much o.o
I'd like to read an Akako from you, now that I think about it. You're one of my favorite fic-writer, that's probably why I'd like to read each of my favorite pair from you xD
Sorry! ^-^""
Again, I'm spamming you with a long comment.
Well, thank you again for writing the first het of my life <3

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nillahoney April 1 2011, 16:48:11 UTC
Yes! I did apply for that one. I wasn't sure if I would because I haven't written Kanjani8 before, and I'm not super familiar with all of them. But I will give it a shot. :)
Oh! I hope you will like it then ^_^
Akako, as in Jin and Koki, right?
Aww, that's so sweet ^_^ I'm glad you'd like to read them from me. I will try and write more.
You're welcome! Thanks for reading :)

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shigefan1992 March 27 2011, 20:56:06 UTC
One word, HOT!

I seriously loved the characterization of Maki, I kinda have this image of a sweet little girl but this kinda blew me away.

The fic was just really playful and sexy and, I just love it.

TegoMaki for the win! =D

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nillahoney April 1 2011, 16:50:04 UTC
Thanks for reading! :D I'm glad you liked it.

Yay! I'm so glad you liked the way I wrote Maki. I thought that even though she has kind of that image of a sweet young woman, she's gotta have a bit of a tiger under there ^_^ Hehe.

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