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nilitara

HP/SPN: Touched by an Angel (Harry/Castiel)

Mar 25, 2010 11:49

Title: Touched by an Angel (XXXI)
Author: nilitara
Fandom: HP, SPN
Rating: PG
Charaters: Harry, Castiel
Summary: No matter the consequences, Castiel can't bring himself to regret it.
For: crossovers100
Prompt: 064. Fall.
Disclaimer: The characters are the property of their respective creator. I own nothing.
Note: Thanks to dixid who read through the ( Read more... )

crossover:hp/spn, crossovers100, character:harry potter, pairing:harry/castiel, fic:touched by an angel

Comments 9

disconsonance July 7 2010, 07:08:06 UTC

This is cute. (: I really enjoyed the story, particularly the way it was written -- the disjointed one-shots made it... interesting. Often, when someone tries to write a crossover with these two fandoms, they'll rely too heavily on budding relationships, or they make characters entirely OOC, just so they can move the story forward -- but you avoided that. :) It was really well done.

Just one, mildly critical, comment. I found there were a lot of... errors, I suppose? It's difficult to know what to call them. I just mean words used incorrectly? The grammar and spelling were fine, but just things like that. I wonder if English is your second language? I'm referring to things like this: "moral wound", it's an easy mistake to make. Or: "where they should have been", and it seems like 'they' should be 'there'.

... if you know what I mean. XD

Anyway, I really enjoyed this story, and I really enjoyed the characters. (:

nilitara February 3 2012, 09:57:21 UTC

Hi, sorry I've taken so long to answer the message.

Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you liked the style of the story.

For your comment, you're right, English is not my first language so I'm fairly aware there should so some mistakes. I just hope it doesn't prevent anyone from reading...

vacagaze April 10 2011, 03:06:39 UTC

Great writing! I want you to follow up to this topic!?!

nilitara February 3 2012, 09:58:03 UTC

Thanks! I've some idea for a follow up but I don't really have the inspiration to write it for now. Maybe one day.

fatigong April 15 2011, 02:32:50 UTC

excellent articles, useful for me. keep writing and happy blogging.

nilitara February 3 2012, 09:58:35 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it

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nilitara February 3 2012, 09:59:04 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm happy to hear that

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nilitara February 3 2012, 09:59:46 UTC

I didn't know it was on delicious. I'm glad you liked it though.