Comments | nileyna: smoke and mirrors.

nileyna

smoke and mirrors.

Nov 18, 2011 11:39

( her grip on his shirt tightens. )

fandom: f(x), fandom: shinee, pairing: jonghyun/krystal

Comments 14

mariposa02 November 17 2011, 20:48:11 UTC

kinda took my breath away.

nileyna November 18 2011, 06:20:47 UTC

Why, thank you. I take that as a compliment. :')

bollywoodrecord November 17 2011, 22:07:32 UTC

krystal is just so easy to torture in fics. and as i can see, jonghyun is too. this is absolutely wonderful <3

nileyna November 18 2011, 06:21:08 UTC

Thanks a bunch!

zhuer November 18 2011, 04:07:53 UTC

oh god. I love this. i'm speechless. almost haha. this is amazing, I love krystal and can ship her so many ways, and jongstal is kinda one of my fave crack!pairings. you are fantastic, write more!

nileyna November 18 2011, 06:22:13 UTC

Thank you so much! It's just that my writing has been sub-par lately, you see. :( But I'll try harder~

marsyaf_love88 November 18 2011, 08:18:59 UTC

do write more and add on some minyul spices in them. i spy lil minyul & i'm already a happy camper. ohmy minyul heart. lil jung def shines more in sad, onesided & broken love stories. i love it. :)

nileyna November 18 2011, 11:27:50 UTC

Thanks. I'll try to come up with better stuff soon!

avages November 19 2011, 02:21:30 UTC

beautiful, beautiful angst ;____;
I loved the dialogue between them, it was just so heartbreaking /bales

nileyna November 19 2011, 03:53:24 UTC

Thank you. :)