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Jun 03, 2012 01:28

Title: Tamed
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meme, dean/castiel, supernatural, fanfiction, sam/gabriel

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bellacatbee June 3 2012, 11:32:50 UTC
Did you write this to break my heart? I think you wrote this to break my heart. The whole first part with Castiel losing his family and Alistair hurting him. Oh, that was so painful and when he jumped - that part was just beautifully written and then there was Dean. All the parts with Dean rescuing him and getting him better made me so happy.

And I loved the end. Gabriel is just constant trouble.

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nileflood June 3 2012, 11:44:23 UTC
Yes I wrote this to break your heart. Although honestly I had no idea about how dark it was going to be or anything like that. It was just meant to be a nice little story about pet!Castiel. <<''

Will candy make it better?

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bellacatbee June 3 2012, 14:22:09 UTC
I think you secretly like hurting Castiel.

I do like candy. I suppose it will make it better.

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grlkat2 June 3 2012, 15:28:37 UTC
Probably a lot darker than OP expected but it was beautiful. Bella's totally right about the jump, my heart stopped when I read that. And Castiel coming back when Dean thought he was gone. I feel like Dean understanding his nature just made Castiel feel even more for him. Just, d'awww and oh my gosh, Alistair. Kill him. I was.... Pleasantly surprised at seeing that the drinking man was Crowley? I thought he might have a part and the nicknames he gave him just pointed more in his direction. I love how it read from Castiel's POV though, made me sad and happy at the same time.

AND YAY. Of course Sammy had Gabriel. This pleases me.

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nileflood June 3 2012, 15:34:19 UTC
I'm really glad you like this! I was a little worried... well, not worried, but unsure of it as it sort of get away from me but the ideas were there.

And Crowley! Yes, drinking man is Crowley. I couldn't not put Crowley in. I re-read Good Omens last night and now just want Crowley. Crowley Crowley Crowley. <3

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cynassa June 5 2012, 14:13:06 UTC
I do like this.
/“Your neighbours are going to find an empty milkshake cartoon in their letter box tomorrow morning.” He warned, slumping down into the sofa./
is A+ Gabriel in action.

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nileflood June 5 2012, 17:10:36 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! And I have to admit, I have a soft spot for Gabriel. And every line concerning him. :D

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