The Toddler's Selfish First Love

May 22, 2011 14:48



Yuri smiled so wide, his heart jumped in happiness. “Yamabuta you’re late but that’s okay” he turned around, disappointment plastered on his face, his smile fades away, seeing Ryutaro.

“Yuri its okay, I’m here” he whispered. “I know its hard to wait for someone that you know in the first place he will never come how long we waited” Yuri hugged ( Read more... )

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jumpfan128 May 22 2011, 08:25:26 UTC
This is just amazing!!!!
Really nice update!!! >.<
Poor chii and Yama-chan :( why didn't yuto tell the truth that Keito is Chii's father and not Yama-chan!? Awww....
And Chii,, Yama-chan loves you for sure! And you love him too~ Don't be too harsh to him nee XD
Thank you for the wonderful update! ^^

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nikuta May 22 2011, 08:30:26 UTC
uwaaaa~~ arigatou~~ you find it amazing..so happy ^_^..
yeah poor yamachii because of yuto they suffered a lot~~..ohh she did but that part was cut~~

he loves chii more than anything in the world..kyaaa i remember the concert LOL!!.. chii will love yamachan more..
you're welcome..anow its my turn to thank you~~

thank you so much~~hope you will like the other chapters too~~

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jumpfan128 May 22 2011, 08:41:17 UTC
Ur most welcome! *hugs* (I'm starting to fond hugging people XD)

Yeah, Yuto is a meanie here! >.< But it's great (s)he apologized! Ahh, I see... Great then! X)

I hope you update soon! ^^

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nikuta May 22 2011, 08:47:35 UTC
wow~~ *hugs back* actually me too..i love hugging people but it was just that i'm shy hihihi.. yuto is so meanie ne~~but still he loves yusri and keito~~

ohh sure i'll update soon..actually i'm done typing the chap 9 here in my document..its just that sometimes some important came that's why my update was delayed..sorry for that ne~~..

mou~~ you're so kind what should i call you then??

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suyooyuuchie14 May 22 2011, 09:20:00 UTC
mou~~ it was really ryu who came huh? but soo nice nin~nin!!!mou!!chii easily forgives ne~but if you love someone how can you remain mad ne~~ yutobasan!!LOL love the name!!:))

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nikuta May 22 2011, 14:29:58 UTC
yeah..its ryuu because he was worried..what if yamada didn't come again..what will happened to yuri.. yeah chii is kind enough to forgive them..
yeah yeah..LOL yutobasan is funny!!..hahaha
thanks kath~kath!!

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mly_yamada May 22 2011, 13:33:21 UTC
I spot Chiitaro moment here....
Ryutaro is the one who come instead of Yamada, ne...
And They are sleeping together... >///< (altough there's nothing happened *whacked*)
Nya~~~

And Yamada kiss Chii in the school..KYA!! >.<
I love Yamachii rabu rabu.... *bouncing*

In the opening of this chapter, I feel my heart break to see Chinen like that...
He just can't accept that he's the only one who don't know everything, ne... Y^Y

But I'm really glad that Yamachii ended together...
The song is really lovely...
I feel my heart warmth as I read the lyric...
ah~~~ *I feel I'm in the flying now*
The lyric make me so calm... ^^

This chap is so amazing, Nina-chan~~~

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nikuta May 22 2011, 14:13:20 UTC
LOL chiitaro spotted hahaha..
yeah because he was so worried to chii that what if yamada didn't show up the poor boy will wait and wait again,,he didn't want the past to happen again..LOL..you're thinking of something mely-chan..hahaha pervy alert~~because ryuutan is so gentleman he can't do that to chii as long as they're lovers..XDD..

hahaha yeah yamachii rabu~rabu~~kichuuu~~

awww...you felt the angst emotion here~~yeah because its hard to believe that your first love is your dad ne~~

LOL its the twinkle twinkle little star yo~~my favorite song when i was a child..ohh i'll come with you..let's fly together!!,,,
aww its good that the lyrics make you calm don't tell me you even sing that song hahaha...

thanks thanks thanks mely-chan~~ *hugs*

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tasyaarw May 22 2011, 14:13:05 UTC
nina-chan!!!!! ! at first i feel sorry to keito >.< yuto is being meanie here -_--
finally yamada and chinen <3 love them gyaa
dunno why i'm smiling like an idiot when i read your fanfic ><

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nikuta May 22 2011, 14:39:16 UTC
aww tasya-chan don't feel bad for keito..yuto can be a good wife and a mother..

kyaaa hooray for yamachii moment ne!!..

LOL!! why you are smiling..no wonder my fic has a power..a magic oyu know..
thanks tasyachan~~arigachuuuuu~~

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tasyaarw May 22 2011, 14:56:17 UTC
demo yuto was being a stupid -________- to pursue her dream? how can he leave keito and chinen >.<

whoahaha power of smiling :D because yamachii part is the best^^

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nikuta May 22 2011, 15:05:59 UTC
hahaha...that's why sometimes dreams can be a hindrance to love!!..
LOL i like your smile so cute *pinches you* ..LOL..yeah the best..thanks~~ne i want to ask you a question

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nikuta May 22 2011, 14:35:47 UTC
hahaha ohh yuto whined in pain..
yeah..yuto ruined everything~~because of a simple matter..
i'm glad you love it..
there will be more on my next update...
thanks a lot!!! ren-chan
ahh before i forgot..belated happy birthday ne

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nikuta May 24 2011, 08:16:52 UTC
hahaha douitashimashite!!!

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