Fanfiction: Sons of Fire, 032 fanfic100

[nikoru]

Title: Sons of Fire
for the fanfic100 comm
Word Count: 2,073+ (just a little. ;p)
Prompt: 032, "Sunset"
Genre: General/ Drama
Rating: PG-13 is good.
Warning: None, just hints
Characters: NejiSasu, cameos of other characters

Comments

[keio]

Great timing then! Am glad you liked it ^^; Neji's learned to hold of his angst a little, but it's still there. ;D Thanks for reading.

[amarisee]

Very well done! I enjoyed it very much... It's nice to see how the characterisation of both Neiji and Sasuke, and how they relate, came out as complex and subtle ...

And no worries about the shift of tense: I have a bad tendency to be a pain about Grammar in reviews and comments, but it worked well for the desired effect!

[keio]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. :3 I was a bit nervous about the shift at first though. They're both (well in my mind at least ^^;) the least likely to make their relationship and personal issues obvious, so it's a bit tricky. XD

Thanks a lot for reading :3

[jabberwocky999]

Wow. This was so good! I've been keeping a keen eye on your stuff ever since I stumbled upon the NejiSasu community, and it's all so cute and symbolic without overt canoodling! Not to mention that your talent with description is to die for! Gosh, talk about envy! Very, very nice. I've loved it all. Keep up the good work.

[keio]

Firstly, a prolonged and undignified SQUEEEEE at your icon, which I may or may not gank for myself, with your permission. X3

Secondly, thanks :D NejiSasu is to die for! Or, heck, even write a hundred fics for! XD

[jabberwocky999]

I would have replied a lot sooner had I not been having account difficulties...

Teehee. Go ahead and snag it if you like it. I'm quite fond of it myself... especially since it appears that they're pissed off because somebody interrupted them in the middle of something... ^_^

Yes, NejiSasu is just too perfect. If only I had a scanner, I could show off some of my less embarrassing lineart of the two of them. Or if I did not get distracted easily, I could finally finish a complete one-shot of the two of them or even start one of the long-shots that I have in mind. But, alas, that is how I work.

So, instead, I will clamp myself to your work and probably read all one hundred of your stories by the end. I'm weird (and scarily obsessed) like that.

[keio]

I could show off some of my less embarrassing lineart

You should! :D I would love to see/ hear your works, and so would the crazy people over at geniuslove, I'm sure. ^^;

[ithilgwath]

wow... this was so well done. I think the timeflow was done very well. No problem following it. It feels like the extreme long shot of a movie, zooming in to the particular story

beautiful

[keio]

Thanks. :) I'm glad you see it as if in a film, because I do too; which is why I don't put too much dialogue and try to describe it instead. ^^

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks again!

[proud_snapist]

Great job! Loved how death was portrayed.

[keio]

Thank you, glad you liked it. :3