Fanfiction: And There was Light, 001 fanfic100

[nikoru]

Title: And There was Light
for the fanfic100 comm
Prompt: 001, "Beginnings"
Genre: General/ Drama
Rating: PG-13 is good.
Warning: SPOILERS of the Hyuuga family history
Characters: NejiSasu (from Naruto)

Comments

[shizuyuki]

*dies from the wonderfulness of your writing*

I cry at how marvellously you can craft words and flesh plots out. First got introduced to your fics via Perfect Blindness, and after reading all the stuff on your page I am getting hooked to NejiSasu.

...like being watched by some all-controlling entity, laughing at their lot on the other side of the wall. For this fic, I was especially captivated by this.

You write really well and I'm secretly happy you took up the NejiSasu theme thing ^____^

I'm adding this place! I hope you don't mind :D

[keio]

Thank you very much for reading. ^^;; I'm very happy you liked it. And please, go ahead and add whatever. ^^;

[mercurychaos]

[twitch twitch]

You writing always amazes me. And I'm both surprised and glad that you're doing so many... now it won't be just me posting my crap at geniuslove every week.

[bloodnblack]

*claps*

VERY EXCELLENT OHMYGAWD

*licks*

xD

I couldn't handle doing a 100 challenge, it would drive me nuts *headdesk*

[stillfindinggod]

Not too close-perhaps a good adult could have sat himself between them comfortably, adn the waiting bench was good enough for a dozen people

Thats my only critique. ...o_o Wow, thats really my only critique. Am I loosing my touch?

*rereads it*

o_o; This is just amazingly well written. I absolutely adore the imagery that you provide us here. Funny thing is that most everyone would be able to relate to this piece since all things begin, in a chance patch of sunlight that we'll remember. That is to say that Im sure everyone has thought to themselves 'wow, what a fanfictionesque moment...', I know I have, and the way you weave your words allows room for people to relate which just makes the fic even better.

Well all of my rambling aside, I just wanted to say that I really liked the fiction - which is surprising for me - and that Ive been enticed to read all 100 of the fictions now; so keep ‘em coming please. ;)

[azuru]

Wow, this was awesome. XD Alright, that's it, I'm making it my goal now to reach your level of writing (ha! yeah, right)! XD Hey, I have to set my standards high... Um, too high, in this case maybe?

Heh, well, there's not much to be said. This was great, fantastic, borderline perfect. I'm definately going to be keeping an eye out for your works. ^^