A truth that's told with bad intent - Act Three, Scenes Eleven to Thirteen

Sep 30, 2009 07:34

Title: A truth that's told with bad intent - Act Three, Scenes Eleven to Thirteen
Author: nikki4noo
Beta: aquila-star and the lovely Anna
Word Count: 6,175
Rating: NC-17, as advised by one of my beta's, the right and proper warning for this section should be "holy hotness batman this is FILTHY" and should not be read in internet cafes in France while there is a large ( Read more... )

series: rascally verse, joanna, eleanora, rating: nc-17, fanfic, kirk-mccoy, star trek

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captain_fine September 30 2009, 00:21:02 UTC
*hugs the wonderful author for being so brilliant*

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nikki4noo September 30 2009, 00:29:03 UTC
Oh you might be my favourite person in the world for that comment :D

So glad you loved the story. I have the silliest grin on my face right now.

btw I also want to lick that neck on your icon. Very fine indeed.

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captain_fine September 30 2009, 03:15:06 UTC
It really is a wonderful fic. You make me want to get back to writing fanfiction...I want to create beautiful things too!

Also, his bellybutton in the picture I used for my icon is just...wow, so cute.

http://11.media.tumblr.com/0ptMJERX9ojqik1754LEdgXyo1_500.jpg

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nikki4noo September 30 2009, 03:27:11 UTC
I know that picture well. Thank you for sharing again *drools*

But it doesn't have his mole. The only pic is from a screencap on the trekcore site when he is hiding under Gaila's bed. My Bones is now as obsessed with that spot as I am.

Write, there can never be enough kirk/mccoy in the world :D

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pixelmayhem September 30 2009, 01:49:42 UTC
Ack! So cute. I just love how you portray their friendship as so strong here. That Bones says not yet and Jim listens, that they can yell at each other like that, I love those glimpses.

And yay Rascally! Hee. I enjoyed your confrontation with Clay and Jocelyn, nicely done and so very Bones-like. And then Jim's outburst and their joining! Woo! Just perfectly detailed, not too much not too little. All in all a wonderful journey! Thanks so much bb!

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nikki4noo September 30 2009, 03:08:31 UTC
I am so glad you liked it. My main beta told me off at the end, she wanted more, which I took to mean a positive that she didn't want the story to end.

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secretsolitaire September 30 2009, 02:16:55 UTC
I just read all of this and it made me smile. I loved the way you built up the UST between Jim and Bones (the scene with the suits! guh!). The sex was yummy, Joanna was charming, and the rabbit was adorable. ;-)

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nikki4noo September 30 2009, 03:11:28 UTC
Thank you! The aim was to make people enjoy it so if it made you smile, yay!

Oh the suits, I had to fan myself while writing.

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masterpenguin82 September 30 2009, 03:11:10 UTC
And it's finished! Awesome story, loved all of it.

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nikki4noo September 30 2009, 03:12:50 UTC
*wipes brow* Finally!

Thank you, so glad you enjoyed it!

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musical_junkie September 30 2009, 03:38:34 UTC
This was FABULOUS. I love fake relationship turned real stories, and this is def. going on the list as one of my faves. (Well, it would if I actually had a list).

As I live it ATL, I loved all of the references to various places. Of course, now I won't be able to go to the Fox without picturing Bones and Jim going at it, but I think I'm okay with that. Hehe.

Much ♥ for this fic and to you for writing it.

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nikki4noo September 30 2009, 03:49:20 UTC
Well a fake list for fake relationship stories sounds about right :D Thank you for the lovely words.

As someone who has never been to Atlanta and was relying on google and anyone from down south to help me out, if I made it feel right to someone who is from there it makes all that bugging and researching pay off.

♥ right back at you.

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