A truth that's told with bad intent - Act Three, Scenes Six to Ten

[nikki4noo]

Title: A truth that's told with bad intent - Act Three, Scenes Six to Ten
Author: nikki4noo
Beta: aquila-star and the lovely Anna
Word Count: 6,650
Rating: NC-17, some really bad words and a bit of friskiness occurs
Pairings/Characters: Kirk/McCoy, Joanna McCoy and various OCs
Summary: Bones finds himself in the predicament of being engaged, to THE Captain James T

Comments

[caitri]

Hee, Jim gives great interviews for tv doesn't he? :D

[nikki4noo]

That boy was born to charm ;)

[adafrog]

huh. Hope Bones isn't gonna have second thoughts.

[nikki4noo]

It's been a very revealing couple of days for Bones. He needs to do some serious thinking without the distraction/temptation that is Jim around.

[adafrog]

Definitely makes sense.

[nikki4noo]

Some people do tend to forget that Jim and Bones have actual working brains in their heads. ;)

[asakochan]

Hmmm, can I punch clay in the face?

[nikki4noo]

Don't worry, Clay will get his ;)

I think you have to stand in line behind Jim and Bones though.

[asakochan]

I don't care if I have to wait in line (I can look at Jim and Bones ass while I wait. xD) I just want one good hit. ^^

(I know how it feels when you family plans to send you somewhere and you have no clue that it's happening.)

[nikki4noo]

Bones will do whatever he can for Joanna's best interests.

Clay is a bit of a piece of work, but he does have that prior history with Bones stealing his girl.

Luckily I came from a family where they made the decision for my high schooling and learned that the kid not having a say wasn't the best idea. My sisters got to choose their high school, not my parents. Trusting your kids and helping guide them is, to me, the best way to parent.

[fritz42]

Holy crap! I thought the whole scene at the tailor where Bones was teaching Jim how to tie a tie was hot, but that was nothing compared to the corridor scene and the one out behind the trees! The kissing alone on those two scenes was intense. I loved how in the corridor when things were heating up, Bones asked Jim if someone was watching them. Loved how Jim said no before kissing him, letting Bones know this was all Jim's feelings and not an act. Now if only Bones can believe all that.

I personally think Jim should have punched Clay and slapped Jocelyn. I can only hope that Jim and Bones can come up with a plan to save Joanna from that horrible boarding school.

I am looking forward to further updates and want to apologize for just lurking and not commenting on past chapters.

"T"

[nikki4noo]

Thank you so much for commenting. I always worry about writing kissing scenes and trying not to make them like bad romance novels, so I get lots of warm fuzzies when others tell me that it worked for them. Bones has a whole lot of thinking to do.

I'm sure that Jim and Bones might have some ideas up their sleeves. ;)

[pixelmayhem]

Woah! That was a lovely turn of events. I like how Joanna wanted a goodnight kiss from Jim too. And ooooh Jocelyn and Clay at their table! Ack. And then the thoughts of the others noticing how Jim is totally smitten with Bones. And then it went smoking hot! Poor Bones all overwhelmed. I'm so looking forward to more.

[nikki4noo]

Whee an Abby icon for the win!

Joanna is such a sweetie, I had no idea she was going to do that. She likes Jim.

Only one bit to go :(