Comments | nikita31j7: La Femme Nikita. Adam Samuelle. 083. And.

nikita31j7

La Femme Nikita. Adam Samuelle. 083. And.

Oct 14, 2006 16:35

Title: Checks and Balances
Fandom: La Femme Nikita
Characters: Operations, Madeline; Michael/Simone mentioned
Prompt: 083. And.
Word count: 821
Rating: PGish
Summary: Not your typical wedding present
Author's Notes: Spoilers through mid-Season 3

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flashback, la femme nikita, fanfic100, madeline, operations, simone, michael

Comments 12

magdalena_01 October 14 2006, 22:10:48 UTC

This backstory was written very well and very logically to explain event within the scope of the series. Quite believable. Good work!

nikita31j7 October 15 2006, 02:40:25 UTC

Thanks! Logical, calculating Madeline is fun to write. I like watching how her brain works. She and Operations already have Michael's future calculated to the nth degree. Or so they believe. ;)

halcyondayz October 15 2006, 16:42:12 UTC

Lucrezia Borgia and Machiavelli couldn't hold torches to these two (or to your plotting for that matter)! Well done and thanks.

nikita31j7 October 15 2006, 17:18:45 UTC

Thanks! I think...??

halcyondayz October 16 2006, 08:26:14 UTC

I meant it as a sincere compliment...you've crafted an intricate and wholly believable back story.

nikita31j7 October 16 2006, 18:44:22 UTC

I think it's kinda creepy that I'm starting to read Madeline's mind. The method behind the madness, perhaps?

Thanks for reading!

sk56 October 16 2006, 02:22:01 UTC

I like this version of the backstory - you've put some thought into this.

nikita31j7 October 16 2006, 02:34:12 UTC

Maybe too much thought. I keep coming up with more Simone stories than Adam ones, but I promise not to write them all. ;) I do have just a few more to thoroughly set the scene. Thanks for reading!

concerte_blonde October 16 2006, 20:56:54 UTC

Brilliant - I loved it.

nikita31j7 October 16 2006, 21:11:24 UTC

Thank you so much! Discovering how and why Adam came to be in the first place has been a very interesting ride. Thanks for reading.

mscam October 19 2006, 19:14:35 UTC

I keep coming up with more Simone stories than Adam ones, but I promise not to write them all. ;)

I for one, will *not* complain if you write those Simone stories! ;)

I *really* liked this, and the last paragraph practically gave me chills; well done!

nikita31j7 October 19 2006, 19:32:45 UTC

Thanks! I'm finding it a bit squidgy that I've been able to channel Madeline lately.

I've only got one more ficlet written that is kinda Michael/Simone centric. For now. ;) I don't *intend* to write any more.