La Femme Nikita. Adam Samuelle. 008. Weeks.

Nov 06, 2006 19:33

Title: The Waiting Game
Fandom: La Femme Nikita
Characters: Michael, Operations, Madeline; Elena and Adam mentioned
Prompt: 008. Weeks.
Word count: 658
Rating: PG
Summary: Time is relative when the prize is worth it
Author's Notes: Spoilers through mid-Season 3

*To preserve continuity, this story should be read directly following: Bluer Than BlueRead more... )

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jaybee65 November 7 2006, 01:46:35 UTC
I've fallen soooo far behind on reading these (as well as everything else on LJ), it isn't even funny, but I'm finally catching up on some things this evening and this immediately caught my eye. This is just so in character to all of them -- even the absent Elena waiting for hours to page -- that it's wonderful to read!

This is truning out to be a really coherent set of stories -- I'm just amazed at how well all the pieces fit together.

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nikita31j7 November 7 2006, 05:04:31 UTC
This is turning out to be a really coherent set of stories -- I'm just amazed at how well all the pieces fit together.

Thank you so much. It's become rather like one of those Chinese puzzle boxes; sometimes things slide in easily--other times you have to pound at them a bit. It's a challenge, but I'm enjoying it. ;) Thanks for reading!

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sk56 November 7 2006, 05:33:49 UTC
I absolutely agree with Jaybee -- this is becoming an anthology, not just a set of shorts. I think it's difficult to write an extended story in lj (the format doesn't really support that kind of timing) but you have subverted the trouble with these!

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nikita31j7 November 7 2006, 18:09:34 UTC
this is becoming an anthology, not just a set of shorts. I think it's difficult to write an extended story in lj (the format doesn't really support that kind of timing) but you have subverted the trouble with these!

Thank, sk! It is difficult to post the stories in chronological order, and some of the pieces I've written don't fully mesh within the pattern I've set. But I am trying. I've got 49 more completed that *should* slot into the appropriate places. Adolescent Adam is almost as fun to write as little Adam, but we won't be seeing him for a while yet. ;) Thanks for reading!

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halcyondayz November 7 2006, 07:54:02 UTC
Another super story. Thank you!

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nikita31j7 November 7 2006, 18:10:27 UTC
Thank you! Love that userpic, btw. ;) Thanks for reading!

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tinpra November 7 2006, 18:47:11 UTC
i love that you have Michael put the pager on the table between them

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nikita31j7 November 7 2006, 18:57:28 UTC
A sort of in-your-face reminder that the pregnancy wasn't *his* idea. Just an oh-so-subtle dig at Ops and Maddy. ;) Thanks for reading!

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mscam November 7 2006, 23:23:19 UTC
You made me visualize this entire scene, and play it through in my head. That takes a lot of doing, because I have an imagination deficit. LOL Very nicely written, and thank you for writing these! ;)

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nikita31j7 November 8 2006, 00:13:12 UTC
That takes a lot of doing, because I have an imagination deficit.

LOL. I *do* try. Thank you, and thanks for reading!

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