FIC: WALKING WITH A GHOST (Dean-centric gen)

[nikiness]

TITLE: Walking With a Ghost 1/10
RATING: R
WORD COUNT: 2092
PAIRINGS: None
SPOILERS: Through episode 6x01… after that it goes completely & totally AU.
SUMMARY: Lately, useful was the last fucking thing he felt.

A/N: Sooo, you're going to have to bear with me for a hot second because I'm super rusty when it comes to fic writing in general & even

Comments

[a_phoenixdragon]

Gahhhh!! More, dammit!! This was...DAMN. This was perfect. How he felt about his new life, Lisa, Ben - this was always what I figured he would feel - and he'd feel guilty for it. Perfection sweetie!! I an hardly wait to read the rest!!

*HUGS*

[nikiness]

thank you! i'm working on part two right now!

*HUGS*

[fifimom]

Sad story but good writing. Thanks for sharing.

[nikiness]

Ohhh, it's probably about to get a little sadder, haha.

[quickreaver]

I dug the first part; I think it perfectly portrayed what Dean must've been feeling, given the circumstances. Hope you don't mind me mentioning this, but you flopped around with your verb tenses quite a bit. Apart from that, solid writing! :D

[nikiness]

Absolutely don't mind you saying that. It's one of my worst habits and my usual beta isn't into SPN. I'm glad that you enjoyed it, though!

[tifaching]

Fantastic beginning. Dean must have felt just that way, and now he's got no one.

Yes to the more, please!

[nikiness]

I'm glad you liked it! I should be able to get part two up very soon, I hope.

[jennierenee]

Great start! I feel so bad for Dean and I can't wait to see where your story goes.

[nikiness]

I have a bad habit of torturing the mens I love. *sigh* I feel kind of bad for Dean too... but not enough to stop! *grin*

[jennierenee]

Oh good, because I definitely don't want you to stop. Hurt him as much as you'd like ;)