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The Lovelace Protocol

Jan 27, 2012 21:59

Title: The Lovelace Protocol pt 1
Author: Alsike
Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds/Steampunk
Pairing: None yet, but really, what do you expect of me?
Rating: PG-13 (right now)
Word Count: 839 (picture count 4) This is more of a teaser than anything.
Apologia: So, very very slowly, I seem to be working my way through the requests I got at the end of last ( Read more... )

criminal minds, x-men, au, crackfic, emma/emily

Comments 6

mord5ith January 27 2012, 22:01:13 UTC

Wow.
You're right, it's nuts!
But it seems very thrilling and one of those stories that have you keeping your breath until the very last minute. A story you could lose yourself in. And I have to admit, the pictures remind me of one of those childhood books I used to be so hooked up on. (And sometimes, I still am. Those books hold more meanings than my University's books. Always changing with age.)
I really hope you keep writing it.

anonymous January 28 2012, 23:50:45 UTC

I liked the pictures that you drew for this story and I enjoy the premise. I hope you continue when you can but I enjoy everything you write. thanks for sharing

frogscookie January 30 2012, 16:21:29 UTC

Very interesting start and I loved the pictures. I can see Emma greatly enjoying being a spy and I can't blame her one bit for not wanting to work with scott. I look forward to seeing how Emily takes meeting captain frost lol.

mayireadtoday February 6 2012, 23:10:09 UTC

Awesome already.

kith_koby February 16 2012, 10:58:03 UTC

Wait, why did I never receive a notification for this? Who dared to delay my pleasure?

Anyway, this is awesome, and the artwork is fun as well. I especially liked the daVinci. The plot is excellent as well, although it could use a bit of clarity, of course, but that's the disadvantage of previews. In any case, I can't wait to find out how Scott ruined Emma's cover, and if Emma is really going rogue... Why must you only give us previews? This needs more!