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City on the River

Aug 08, 2011 23:24

Title: City on the River 18/?
Author: Alsike
Fandom: Criminal Minds/X-Men
Pairing: Emily Prentiss... eventually Emma Frost
Rating: PG-15
Summary: When one person travels into an alternate universe a thousand others are created. What if Didi showed up without a time slip on Emily's doorstep, in a world without mutants? What would a twenty-five year ( Read more... )

city on the river, didi, criminal minds, x-men, au, emma/emily

Comments 18

wizened_cynic August 9 2011, 18:37:12 UTC

I enjoyed the public v private debate immensely. (I'm for private, only because I've never been to public, and I like girls in school uniform.)

tamoline August 9 2011, 21:24:15 UTC

I'm never quite sure whether Emma is breaking Emily, or vice versa in this story. Or, quite possibly, yes. It's always a fun read. Thanks for the update!

siralesud August 10 2011, 06:30:34 UTC

My heart! Oh what you do to my poor, poor heart, but I love it so. I check your journal near every day, still, and to see this updated was almost cause for an audible squee. These two, as always, are fantastic, and your writing stellar. Don't doubt yourself or your abilities. You have woven these two characters together so intrinsically and beautiful in so many 'verses, and I know that I have followed you through every one of them and will until the end. Thank you for writing, and I hope to see more from you soon.

anonymous August 12 2011, 10:05:08 UTC

"Sigh"... Poor Emily. Emma is cruel even in this universe.

Great story you have here. anonymous August 13 2011, 04:27:39 UTC

Hello, I've reading you for a while, mostly this diamond universe of yours. I love it. You have a gift, kiddo. I don't know what are you planning for this story. But I can tell you what I would love to see in it. Particularly in this story. I would love to see Rossi offering a job to Emily, a field job. Now that she's so down with life in home, because Emma telling her she doesn't want her is definitely a downer, maybe it's time for her to get new horizons in the officce. I would love to see Emily wounded, of course not a lethal wound, just something that keeps her home for a week or so...reading and learning in profiling. I know in this universe they are both younger than in Fake empire. Maybe you could start it with the need of a translator from russian or arabic. Then you take it from that, not too specifically to Emily transference to BAU, or whatever you want to call it. You end the chap with the unsub following Emma and Didi home, and Emily having to shot him for their very lives...You never know what can come from the first ( ... )