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nike_ravus

Sweet Talk 101 part 3

Jan 06, 2011 22:59

Title: Sweet Talk 101 (3/4)
Author: Alsike
Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds, with a slight Glee (or at least Ryan Murphy) fusion.
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Emma/Sebastian, Emily/JJ, Emma/Emily
Word Count: 5677 (the whole thing will probably end up about um... 17,000)
Apologies: So, someone asked for New Years fic, and someone else complained about the lack of ( Read more... )

criminal minds, nc-17, x-men, au, emma/emily

Comments 9

tamoline January 7 2011, 04:34:55 UTC

Can I just say that I really appreciate in what pretty shapes you break your characters? I'm fully aware it's a really weird thing to say, but when I design characters they tend to be defined by their weaknesses as much as their strengths, and you do such *interesting* things with the people in your stories that I would never think of.

Also I'm enjoying the story, but that's pretty much a given. :)

atrumnoxnoctis January 7 2011, 05:11:58 UTC

Sebastian, you bastard! Get the hell away from Emma! D:

God, the suspense! I was sad when the I reached the end because I still wanted to read more!

I love the various levels of evil that you endow certain characters with. It adds just that much more depth to the story as a whole, and it also sets up a factor of unpredictability. Sometimes you honestly don't know what's going on in an individual's mind until it actually happens.

Oh, and as for the drabbles, it will have to be delayed a little bit longer, unfortunately. I was in something of car "accident" my first day back in town, so I'll be busy going over info with the insurance people for the next couple of days. Many apologies!

Awesome chapter as always though!

nike_ravus January 7 2011, 13:21:06 UTC

Oh man! Don't sweat it, really, as long as you're okay.

Glad you liked the chapter!

atrumnoxnoctis January 7 2011, 16:37:13 UTC

Oh, I'm fine, actually! I wasn't even in the car at the time. I just came back from the bookstore to find that my car had been backed up into. The front end was seriously damaged, and total cost of repair is around a thousand dollars or so! @_@ I'm trying to see if my insurance agent will help me lower that price a bit, but I'm seriously doubting it. It sucks being a poor, college student... *sighs*

I always enjoy your work! You're awesome! X3

flowerhammer January 7 2011, 09:05:07 UTC

No happy ending this time, right?

It hurts me to write this but seriously, stop writing fanfic, work (more) on your book and send me a signed copy when it's done.

(Please.)

nike_ravus January 7 2011, 13:29:24 UTC

:D
It's great to have support! Don't worry, I'm hammering away at my book, made it through a complete revision, and now it is way too long. So I'm back at the beginning, tightening, and trying to make the first 3 chapters the best they can be. And writing query letters.

I will put you on the list!

mayireadtoday January 7 2011, 16:56:46 UTC

Fantastic paragraph: "Emma, objectively, was probably only a five or six. [...] She was like a hurricane, descending on a beach town with no warning, wrecking indiscriminately, leaving devastation in her wake."

miyuve January 9 2011, 02:56:09 UTC

Wow!! First you make my holidays by updating one of your amazing creations and now I come back after being tortured in the ER to find more great chapters to enjoy...If I knew you personally I would spoil you a lot (I tend to that with my friends, LOL ( ... )