Danny Zuko 18: All at Sea

Aug 06, 2010 22:35



Title: Danny Zuko was a Hot Chick (part 18 of 20)
Author: Alsike
Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over
Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss
Rating: NC-17
AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.
Word Count: 1722
Citrus Taste Summer Battle Prompt # 8. 'Out at Sea' Fantasy

Apologies: Oh my god this section nearly killed me.  It was pain!  I fought with it for hours.  I ( Read more... )

criminal minds, summer, nc-17, x-men, au, citrus taste, emma/emily

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katiepult August 7 2010, 02:59:56 UTC
wow. I think this is actually my favorite chapter so far. So painful.

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mayireadtoday August 7 2010, 03:53:36 UTC
Does Emily's mother care because Emma's a girl? Or is it because Emily is having sex at all? Or is it something else?

The ending was sweet.

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jijibebe August 7 2010, 04:31:00 UTC
oh whoa, the road is never smooth for our young lovers, is it? I think you did a good job getting across Ambassador Prentiss' pov. I probably would be worried too if i had a daughter dating Emma! Glad to see Emma and Emily make-up in the end.

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rebelbyrdie August 7 2010, 07:43:03 UTC
Gorgeous angst

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mauders August 7 2010, 10:36:44 UTC
I loved this chapter. I liked Elizabeth stating her case, but she needs to accept that Emily is going to start having romantic/sexual relationships and she wont be able to control it. As for needy relationships, this is something Emily will have to find out for herself, like we all do.

You do Emma/Emily angst so well and I love it.

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