Pretty Girls Make Graves (aka Loveaholic) 8/8

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Title: Pretty Girls Make Graves (aka Loveaholic) 8/8

Author: Alsike

Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over

Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss

Rating: R

AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.

Apologies: Don't kill me, please?

Summary: Sometimes the plans you make have a chance to become real. What if what you thought you wanted isn't enough?

Comments

[kith_koby]

Very interesting story. I'm not sure what to think of it, though. It holds a lot of drama and tragedy (?), but is left very open. The story contained fabulous lines (such as "For once it looked pleasant and welcoming, not like the doorway to hell. The curtains must be on fire, Emma thought, and kept walking." and "Emma thought this was amazing fun. No one got molested at her family dinner parties until after dessert, people usually just stormed out or collapsed in the pudding."), which was very good. I especially enjoyed Emma's stance on sin. But why do you feel it must end in tragedy? Yes, Emma wouldn't become part of a family, but she doesn't have to if all she is is Emily's lover. Admittedly, it will be a hard line to walk, especially considering her relationship with the children, but Emma's probably walked harder. I'm not advocating you finish it like that; in fact, I like it better this way, when it can be deducted and extrapolated (if you so wish) from the last scene of the ficmix. Why do people feel the family would be ruined