Samson and Delilah (critique?)

[niguana]

im working on this little thing of mine and was looking for some critique on the cloth or the scenery or the characters themselves. I wanted to make Samson huge, but he turned out real small anyway...whatever. Anyway Samson is a Draft Horse and Delilah is a Bongo Antelope. Some things like probably the braids or the poses are off, i dunno...i was

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[niguana]

ya, i was wondering about that big bread from his tail...i should probably place it somewhere among the other breads. I made it all tight and big since it's from his tail and a dragging tail while fighting could become a compromise...but i see what your saying.

i'll move it elsewhere or just remove it all together.
thanks man!

[airukitsu]

I think if you shortened Delilah's leg she would look a bit smaller in comparison to Samson, it might help with the size.

Also, make sure you move Samson's right leg out from he left more, they kind of lump together into one and it's the first thing I notice when looking at the image.

Otherwise, it looks good to me :O I touching scene

[niguana]

good idea on delilah, i'll try it out and see how that goes.
And thanks for pointing out samson's leg. I noticed something was wrong with the area, but it never came to mind until you pointed it out.
Thanks!