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nightspank

1-Sentence Table

Apr 29, 2009 14:17

50 Sentences on Kara and Kendra and Kara/Kendra and sometimes just on Kara because I felt like it.

I don't do the whole claim thing, so I totally stole this prompt list from some comm, can't remember, but whatever. I finished it. Not doing another one if I can help it, at least not in this fandom, anyway. This was HARD!

( 50 Long Sentences )

fic, battlestar galactica

Comments 5

arabrab47 April 30 2009, 06:22:30 UTC

hey! these are awesome! I'm only about halfway through so far, but this one jumped out at me:
They had put up a new cell in the brig for the Cylon that Helo had brought back, and everytime she visited, she felt strange being outside the bars instead of in.

I'm not sure why exactly, but that just grabbed me and I love it. something about the thoughtfulness of it on kara's part, and the sense of how everything, including kara, has changed so much and so fast. I don't know. but i love it.

arabrab47 April 30 2009, 06:33:47 UTC

ok! finished! man, I can see why that would be hard! but I really liked these.
There's plenty of good dark stuff in there, which I expected and was not disappointed about of course, because you rock the dark stuff. But I also love the moments/glimmers/fellings of sweetness and happiness between kara and kendra that pooped up in some of them. Like this one:

Everything was sudden now, a new DRADIS contact, an explosion on the hangar deck, and even her falling for Kendra was sudden, unexpected, and she didn't realize it until they laid together in her bunk, exhausted, and she closed her eyes in contentment.

That one is just really nice and makes me happy. and I know there were others that had a similar feel to them - just a great mood and tone that conveys this positive force of a relationship.

The other one that jumped out at me was 'Words.' just . . . wow. I like what you did with that one. a lot.

I'm tired . . . so this is maybe even more incoherent than usual. sorry!

nightspank April 30 2009, 12:41:19 UTC

Ha, your favourites are my LEAST favourites, hahahahaha! Some of them I just didn't know what to do, so I just typed something and was ticked but kept it.

I like rain and ocean the best. I actually like the first ones I wrote the best.

butchon May 1 2009, 07:36:04 UTC

that *does* look like a lot of hard work,
but thanks for keeping it up, I enjoyed it greatly.
>thumbs up<
I think you realy nailed something "Kara" with all of them, but I loved Weep and Black, and Drink the most.
and yey again for Kara/Kendra.

nightspank May 1 2009, 17:13:19 UTC

Thanks! I didn't realize it would be this hard. I mean, it's only 50 sentences. But you have to tell a complete thought in just one sentence each, and that's the difficult part.

Oh, black is one of my favourites, too! I like the way that was turned out.

Ha, I'm totally becoming a Kara/Kendra shipper...