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In Those Brief Moments, All I See is Red: Chapter 7

Apr 15, 2009 16:28

Title: In Those Brief Moments, All I See is Red
Author: NightSpank
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica
Pairing: Kara/Kendra, Kara/Lee
Rating: Overall PG-13 (sex, drinking, drug use)
Warnings: Femslash
Summary: Slight AU - Kendra hears the hybrid speak but is rescued off of the baseship at the last moment. (Okay, big huge frakking AU.)

( Chapter 7 )

fic, battlestar galactica

Comments 4

arabrab47 April 16 2009, 03:22:54 UTC

oooh! ominous chapter. Really good build-up for the rest.
also, I like Kendra's matter of fact attitude about 'the morning after.' The scolding about lack of sleep? was great!
and poor Kara! she's having a tough time pulling herself together, huh? understandable, but sad.

nightspank April 16 2009, 03:33:51 UTC

Well, that's because it's coming up to the end. *sniffles*
Right, because neither of them are really the type to go all chatty, and Kendra's just too focused on her work. And... well, I'd be spoiling something if I gave any more away!
Yup, but she still doesn't want help from anyone figuring it all out.

applespank April 16 2009, 07:24:44 UTC

You are completely creeping me out with all the Leoben visions (this is good, I like being creeped out). Poor Kara, thinking she can handle everything on her own. and Lee with his jealousy that never comes across right, I feel bad for him too. At least he's trying.. a little bit.
I agree with smirk, a very ominous chapter indeed and I love your Kendra. I also love the image of Kara waking up to a mouthful of black Kendra hair. Very nice. How many chapters do we have to go? I don't want my night fic to end!

nightspank April 16 2009, 12:36:59 UTC

Oh, just wait, just wait! If you're creeped out now... heh heh.
Two chapters left! If everything goes as planned, that is. It's a lot to get through.