[Fic] The M Word (Twilight)

[nightsoftamara]

Title: The M Word
Pairing/Characters: Edward/Bella, some Alice/Jasper
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Genre: General
Length: One-shot, 8,877 words
Summary: Four times Bella didn't want to marry Edward, and one time she did.
Disclaimer: I own nothing recognizable from the Twilight series, and am making no profit from this work of fanfiction.

Comments

[reetinkerbell]

Oh this was just lovely.

[fantasium]

...wow.

That was just... breathtaking. I can easily tell you've put a lot of effort and thought into this story, and I must say you've done a brilliant job of keeping everyone well and truly in character. I so enjoyed reading the fic, both because of the wonderfully varied "missing moments", but also because of its depth.

Thank you so much for sharing this!

[bebitched]

I highly enjoyed all of these. Each of them was almost like a little fic of their own, a little slice with different characters and different interactions - which I love. It's really interesting to see the whole 'Edward wants to marry Bella but Bella isn't so keen on the idea' thing from all sides. Great work!

[thalia_csiny]

I absolutely adore this fic! Every single chapter captured the characters involved so well, it was breathtaking. I must admit, this is by far, my most favorite, "-- 4 times they did, -- 1 time they didn't" fic..

From the books, we only got Edward and Bella's POV of the whole marriage thing but it's so refreshing to get it from the rest of the Cullens. I especially love An Impasse and my favorite line:

“It’s hardly suitable for public performance. He spends half his time preaching hellfire and damnation, and the other half making terrible fang jokes. Alice would dismember him before she’d let him deliver it on our wedding day.”

I'm totally saving this page in my bookmark bar. I can't wait to re-read it all over again! Well done!!

[frostbit_sky]

Oh I loved it. This is going into memories

I really liked the different insight we get from the Cullen's. Especially Esme, who is so under used.

I loved these lines:

He’s so afraid of hurting you somehow - losing control, or destroying your soul. He’s never thought that he deserves happiness, and he’s just waiting for something to go wrong. He worries that you’ll hate what he’s done to you, that you’ll hate him in the end.”

...

it would be the only thing that claimed her as his from this life into the next. She would lie down for the last time as a human wearing his ring, and she would awaken as a vampire still wearing it.

Wonderful writing.