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kiwi_magic November 22 2007, 06:56:29 UTC
Yay! :D Nice job.

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nightrose83 November 22 2007, 17:05:57 UTC
I don't think it's that good.

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kiwi_magic November 22 2007, 17:55:55 UTC
Well, some things need to be worked on, but in general it was quite good. You have a distinct voice and it's an interesting one, one that say, "read my story, damn it."

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nightrose83 November 22 2007, 20:30:16 UTC
Hmm, didn't know I was so compelling. I guess not bad for an hour's work.

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