So I read the part where the machines raided their seed crop before I went out for dinner. On the way back we went into a grocery store. On the way out I saw a shelf full of packaged seeds. I immediately thought, "Oh we really need to get some of those!" Then I was like, "Hmm, wait a minute..."
You know how sometimes fictions put you in a dream-like state of mind? I think I'm there right now. Love it so far.
I love stories that stick with me for awhile. Often times I don't even realize it's happening until some idle thing happens and I flash back to a memory from a story. :)
I am enjoying this, usually I avoid this kind of stuff. Only because I have a fear of it happening in real life! Jensen is just the kind of person I would like to be stuck with. :)
I'm not very good at showing verses telling so I'm thrilled this scene worked for you. :) Any time I can make my readers feel something, I count that as a win.
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You know how sometimes fictions put you in a dream-like state of mind? I think I'm there right now. Love it so far.
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I love stories that stick with me for awhile. Often times I don't even realize it's happening until some idle thing happens and I flash back to a memory from a story. :)
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, hon!
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Thanks for taking a chance on this story especially since it's not your usual cup of tea. I'm so glad you liked it!
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I'm not very good at showing verses telling so I'm thrilled this scene worked for you. :) Any time I can make my readers feel something, I count that as a win.
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