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[Naruto] The Killer in Me, 1/1 [Zabuza]

May 07, 2008 19:26

The Killer in Me [1/1]
[Naruto] Zabuza, Haku, an OC
( This cat is your conscience. Kill it. )

char:momochi zabuza, fandom:naruto

Comments 2

premium_shaday May 7 2008, 21:00:31 UTC

Whew... that was intense.

dayadhvam_triad May 8 2008, 00:53:04 UTC

Wow, this is really well-done. I like how you paralleled Zabuza's killing of the cat with Haku's own later treatment (how he lets the cat go). The impact of Zabuza pretending he doesn't see is also very good. :D Nice job!