Fic: Fides: Chapter 4

[nighthawkms]

Name: Fides
Chapter: Chapter 4: As We Dance With The Devil Tonight (4.5/5.5)
Author: nighthawkms (Beta'd by emilys_knickers and dark_tsume_fan
Fandom: Scrubs
Genre: Dark, Fantasy, Slash, Supernatural, AU
Story Rating: R
Warnings: Demons, religious references, violence, sexual situations
Summary: Perry's got a problem, and seeks some alternative help. When his plan goes awry, can JD

Comments

[andsoshewrites]

Yeah. I hope you’re ready to have your ass kicked by my protégé.

I love you for that line.

Made me squee.

And...

a cliffy?

Whyyyyy?

Can't wait for more!

[lokiloo]

AADJKLBDKSCHBKLSHBD I WANTS TO READ THE REST!! XO

*throws flowers* You really rock at this. Like, REALLY ROCK.

[pavonine]

“How do I get him to notice me?”

“Now is not the time kid!”

“Just tell me, damn it! I need to distract him!”

“Piss him off!” Well, wasn’t that just the most general statement ever that really didn’t help him?

*gigglefit* Awesome lines.

You did a very good job on the Latin, to be honest. I'm going to be persnickety and leave my (very very minor) corrections after the comment. OMG. OMG. SEE MY ICON FOR FURTHER OMG-NESS. JD KICKETH ASS. HE DOTH. Now I can't wait for Chapter 5, for I want to know what that Bible quoting from Chapter 1 was all about. And to see that Perry makes it out alive. Because he has to. Has to.

Minor Latin corrections:

Attero meum obicem. (As a general note, just because it's semi-interesting, you don't need to include "ego," since it's already attached to the verb.)

That, and:

Reprobo vos per fide!

I understand if you're not going to go through and change all of the Latin, but again, did I mention the persnicketiness and, earlier, the show-offiness? ;D

[nighthawkms]

Heehee, well I'll definitely keep this stuff in mind, and I'll try to find time to change it. Much thanks for the grammatical help, you're welcome to continue doing it for any of my fics pertaining to Latin.

And as to Perry's survival... you'll just have to wait for next week to see :P

[kakashifan887]

8D
HOORAY!!! i hope you update again soon

[emilys_knickers]

That was awesome XD That catalystic scene, the descriptions, the outright sociopathy of the demon, Perry's franticism, JD's desperation, Dia's need for JD to just not do it at all...

Guh, gave me gigglies and shivers and woots all at the same time! Fantastic, girl. :)

You've been doing an amazing job with this fic; it's so nifty to see it posted :)

Great job! ^_^ *huggles*

[nighthawkms]

Hehe, graci ^_^