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greeneyelove November 17 2007, 16:51:38 UTC
This was great. I like Dick just kissing him. Sometimes it takes actions to get the point across, especially when dealing with The Bat.

I'll add this to the masterlist asap.

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nightfall_0 November 19 2007, 14:10:52 UTC
Thanks :)
Yeah, dealing with The Bat gets you crazy, and Dick has a looong experience about it^^
I was kinda nervous posting it, it's my first fic

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vespertila November 17 2007, 19:35:53 UTC
Grazie Signore, grazie, graaaaaaa-zieeeeeeee! Finalmente hai postato una fic, allelujah!
(Sì, sono molto stronza, ma tanto era cosa che già sapevi ;))

Povera stellina, Dickie ♥ Che tenero che è qui! - E da parte mia, sai che è davvero il massimo dell'apprezzamento :D
Scrivi più spesso!

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nightfall_0 November 19 2007, 14:12:46 UTC
Meglio tardi che mai, no :P
(E sì, lo so che quando vuoi la stronza ti viene proprio bene :P)

Sono onorata del suo apprezzamento, se riesci a dire a Dick che è tenero allora sono stata brava :D
Cercherò di postarne altre il prima possibile
Grazie :*************

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vespertila November 19 2007, 18:11:01 UTC
Certo, tutto è meglio di un dito in un occhio.
(Lei mi lusinga *smirks*)

Sì, vabbè, ora però non ti montare la testa =P
Cancella "cercherò" - SCRIVI! :D

E crossposta, non ci stare a pensare su ;-)

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nightfall_0 November 20 2007, 10:42:25 UTC
Anche di un dito da un'altra parte, ma...sorvoliamo che è meglio :D (ma si figuri^^)

Ok, ok, scriverò, intanto ho crosspostato, incrociamo le dita :D

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bradygirl_12 November 17 2007, 23:45:43 UTC
This was a fun read! I liked seeing Dick's frustration build because I knew he was going to give Bruce what for and probably blurt out his feelings! Good job! :)

'Hunk Wonder'--perfect! ;)

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nightfall_0 November 19 2007, 14:14:51 UTC
Glad you liked it, thank you :)
Bruce's stubborness was the perfect thing to make Dick blurt out everything!

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ladybugkay November 20 2007, 00:58:01 UTC
You have the characters' voices down perfectly.

>>Their relationship was almost good, but Dick couldn’t shake off the feeling that Bruce couldn’t see him entirely as a skilled and competent man, able to face the different situations he was involved into. The more he tried to come out of the bat’s shadow, the most he found himself tied into it.

This is exactly Dick's problem. In so many things. Very well put.

I like the almost treasure map feel to this story, with Bruce making Dick chase him all over, just trying to track him down and hold him still long enough to kiss him. And I really like your Bruce--he's Batman, yes, but he's also a lot of fun.

Well done for your first Bruce/Dick story. It's always great to see a new B/D writer.

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nightfall_0 November 20 2007, 10:46:51 UTC
Thanks for coming here and commenting, I'm happy to know you liked it, I tried my best and it's good it works :)

Bruce was the one giving me more troubles, I'm more confident with Dick's behaviour :)

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gilda_elise November 20 2007, 12:54:58 UTC
Very nice! I like how Dick finally just has enough and takes matters into his own hands...so to speak. :-)

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nightfall_0 November 20 2007, 14:32:24 UTC
Thanks :)
Dick has a lot of patience, but with the Bat it's never enough^^ He had to act, al last :D

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