holy shit it's a GK snippet

[nightanddaze]

The inspiration for this is the dumbest thing ever. But it's time to get back in the writing saddle, inspired by Gelaskins or not. There's a porn battle on and I want to get me some of that.

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[amberlynne]

OMG YOU PUT BRAD IN A COMAAAAAAAAAAA!

[nightanddaze]

I kind of did.

[alethialia]

imagine a different time and place, where Brad’s brain isn’t swollen shut, and they could have done more than dated a very little.

::sniffs:: Brad's in a coma and they didn't even do anything more than date a very little! That's just cruel.

Gorgeous phrasing (and imagery, as always!) but how terribly cruel. My poor boys.

[nightanddaze]

::sniffs:: Brad's in a coma and they didn't even do anything more than date a very little! That's just cruel.

But maybe they could! If Brad figures his comascape stuff out.

And Nate does not get whisked away by a nurse. But that seems unlikely.

[alethialia]

And Nate does not get whisked away by a nurse. But that seems unlikely.

WHAT?! What kind of unjust world is this? I object!

[nightanddaze]

These things happen? IDK.

And Brad is coma GALLIVANTING, THE CAD.

[dana_knockouts]

Oh, I'm so glad you're back!

Although I have to say that Traumatic Brain Injury breaks my heart, I think this story is gorgeous.

Love these boys.
*Is sad*

[nightanddaze]

Oh, I'm so glad you're back!

Thank you! I'm gonna do my best to stick around!

Love these boys.
*Is sad*

<333 Don't be!

[snglesrvngfrend]

THE SADDLE IS NO LONGER EMPTY.

Ahead the glowing is a soft heart shape, higher than Brad’s head, a shade of pink Brad would have had a vulgar name for once but now it’s just pink, the pink of some delicate flowers Brad saw once in the clearing when he got here.

This is your brain when it isn't working?? THAT SHIT'S UNFAIR. This is the perfect setting for your poetic writing style. Yay for writing! YAAAY!

[nightanddaze]

THE SADDLE IS NO LONGER EMPTY.

Unless I fall out, which hopefully won't happen.

Yaaay writing! How is your thing going?

[ze_zebra]

Oh my! At first I thought you were describing some limbo state, because, yes, Brad would ttly be part of the "program". And then you had to break my heart...
The dumbest thing ever helped you create one of your more interesting pieces so far (at least from my pov). Clap, clap, clap.

[nightanddaze]

The dumbest thing ever helped you create one of your more interesting pieces so far (at least from my pov). Clap, clap, clap.

Thank you, thank you!