Comments | nightanddaze: GK snippet: FWB

nightanddaze

GK snippet: FWB

May 05, 2010 14:58

This is a thing I wouldn't mind expanding on, since I love love love the idea of breaking up and being okay with that, but I also kind of like this the way it is, tiny snapshots. Maybe I will revisit the theme sometime.

FWB. B/N. NC-17. 503.

( We could be friends with benefits )

porn, generation kill, snippet, writing

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amberlynne May 5 2010, 22:14:48 UTC

Why must you write things that are hot which make me sad?? IT IS NOT FAIR! I love how well they know each other and how that makes it better for them. BUT IT HURTS MY HEART THAT THEY ARE NOT TOGETHER ANYMORE!! ~feather~

nightanddaze May 6 2010, 03:20:41 UTC

And by before I meant:

( ... )

amberlynne May 6 2010, 04:09:00 UTC

passionofmind May 5 2010, 22:38:58 UTC

Jesusfuck. I think that's the hottest thing I've ever read. Points for describing the scorching hotness that is post-breakup sex.

“Slut,” Brad says fondly. “You fucking love my fingers.”
Heh. In my world this is TRUFAX.

I love this verse. lovelovelove. They way they are so comfortable with each other, with their bodies. That they know exactly how to push each others buttons, but it's not a thing.

The detail about the fishtank was fantastic, the familiarity.

Oh man, I would love to see anything else you've got concerning this :)

nightanddaze May 6 2010, 03:32:06 UTC

Jesusfuck. I think that's the hottest thing I've ever read.

Holy wow! That's a compliment!

I love this verse. lovelovelove. They way they are so comfortable with each other, with their bodies. That they know exactly how to push each others buttons, but it's not a thing.

Although I like this the way it is (I think) I love the idea of Brad and Nate who are broken up, but totally okay with that, and okay with being fuck buddies. It's maybe too angst-free to sustain for a long story, but I FLOVE IT.

The detail about the fishtank was fantastic, the familiarity.

In my mind, it's canon Brad has saltwater fishtank that he is sort of fanatical about. It appeals to his love of rules and preciseness. It took a long time before Nate was allowed to feed those fish, but he has certainly not lost the privilege even with the break-up.

Not that I've thought about it or anything. Thanks for the awesome comment!

passionofmind May 7 2010, 01:17:08 UTC

In my mind, it's canon Brad has saltwater fishtank that he is sort of fanatical about. It appeals to his love of rules and preciseness. It took a long time before Nate was allowed to feed those fish, but he has certainly not lost the privilege even with the break-up.

*swoon*

nightanddaze May 7 2010, 04:30:16 UTC

It is really oddly hot, isn't it?

Nate buys him a real live starfish for his birthday and Brad is so so so pleased. Nate practically has to pry his face off the glass (except not really. Brad wipes down the tank when he touches it) for his birthday sex.

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oxoniensis May 5 2010, 23:02:07 UTC

What Amber said! All of it, exactly. I'd copy and paste it, but that'd look funny.

nightanddaze May 6 2010, 03:34:07 UTC

Hee! I went back and read it again, but in a more Signe way (which was more or less the comment superimposed on Stands' face).

oxoniensis May 6 2010, 20:48:23 UTC

Hah, I thought you'd just read it in an English accent! But I like your version too. *g*

amberlynne May 6 2010, 04:08:17 UTC

THEN I WENT TO READ YOUR STORY TO MAKE MYSELF FEEL BETTER AND IT WAS WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORSE! :( :( :(

♥

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jujubinha May 5 2010, 23:03:16 UTC

Damn, this is great. Except it's NOT! I don't want to like this! And you can only revisit this theme if they fuck and fuck and fuck and then realize that they still want more, the end, trufax. And yes, my word is rule.

*snort*

Seriously, though? I like this, dammit. It hurts! I don't like that it hurts, but I like it! It's all very conflicting, you see.

alethialia May 6 2010, 04:56:04 UTC

1000x THIS!

nightanddaze May 6 2010, 05:22:25 UTC

And yes, my word is rule.

*snort*

Hee! Well, since this is me, I doubt you would get what you want, what with my love of ambiguity and "good" break-ups. But I will take your rule under advisement ;)

fosfomifira May 6 2010, 00:09:38 UTC

You know what kills me? The kissing. For some reason the fact that they're so happy kissing each other after the break up hurts more than their breaking up. They aren't supposed to be kissing like that if they're not together anymore, but they obviously didn't get the memo.

I'm intrigued and confused. Yay!

nightanddaze May 6 2010, 05:30:49 UTC

I'm intrigued and confused. Yay!

I can work with this.